** Impudence transforms into fear. **
Strouff holds back his reiattou from cutting down Tetsuo after hearing those words coming out from Cain's mouth, and then he stares at Cain's reiattou.
''It's been a long time since I last saw you with your reiattou,'' Says Strouff.
''You don't have the rights to decide whether I shall show you my reiattou or not,''
''Well then, let me take it away from your body, your soul,''
Strouff immediately jumps up to the air and spins towards Cain with his reaittou. Cain backs away from him instantly but Strouff then shows up behind him with his reiattou aiming Cain's throat.
But Strouff stops his hand right away. He didn't slit Cain's throat, but instead, he puts his reiattou against the throat and he whispers into Cain's ears,
''I win,'' Whispers Strouff.
Cain's face is as calm as always. He didn't have the fear in him at all, and then, he grins.
''Kidou of Trapping, Monarchy Guard,''
Cain jumps away from him and a form of reiatsu shield appears from 4 sides and traps Strouff inside it. Strouff is surprised by this counter attack.
He then touches his hand against the barrier, and he smiles.
''Cain Rouxfore, the former leader of the Shinigami Kidou Squad, and also the Chieftain of 2nd Division, you haven't change a bit at all, did you?'' Says Strouff with an alluring smile.
''None of your business,'' Replies Cain calmly.
''Oh, how pity of you then, Kidou of Destruction, Dragon Crash Hyphoon!'' Yells Strouff and then he breaks open the barrier with a blue reiatsu energy blast.
Cain's face turns into a even more focus and serious look after the incident. He grips on to his reiattou even harder this time and is ready withstand any attacks from his opponent, Strouff.
''Strouff Gengall, Chieftain of 7th Division,'' Says Strouff with a serious voice while pointing his reiattou at Cain.
Strouff then dashes towards Cain again. This time, he djinns zigzagly trying to confuse Cain thus creating many illusions of him in his trail. Cain stands still and focus on Strouff's movement.
When Strouff closes in, Cain immediately jumps upward and strike down with his reiattou. But Strouff blocks it easily with his reiattou. Then Strouff punches Cain in his stomach with his left fist.
Cain vomits out blood immediately but then he regains his balance and jumps back to land on the ground. He presses his hand against his stomach and gasps for air.
''Giving up already?'' Says Strouff sarcastically.
Cain then stares at Strouff, with that anger can be seen in both of his eyes.
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Colt collapses onto the ground with his reiattou, he is gasping for air. Bruises can be seen everywhere on his body. His opponent stands before him. He is a tall guy, short and buzz-cut hair and slanted eyes. Not to mention that he has an asian-look.
''You're easy,'' Says Gonzhuca, whom is Colt's opponent.
''Not so fast!'' Yells Colt as he gets up from the ground and starts swinging his reiattou against Gonzhuca.
Gonzhuca blocks away all the attacks without much trouble but then suddenly Colt kicks in and Gonzhuca got pushes backward. He then grips on to his reiattou and smiles.
''That's the spirit,'' Says Gonzhuca, and he continues,
''Well then, I shall let you suffer,'' He pauses for a while thus staring at Colt.
''[First Tear, Mammothnic Rage]'' Yells Gonzhuca.
His body starts to transform. His muscles are building up grotesquely and enormously. Soon enough, he now possesses a giant body. Both his fists are huge and destructive. Colt is seriously shocked by what is standing before his eyes.
''Are you scare now?'' Says the giant Gonzhuca, and he continues after a short pause,
"This is my First Tear, I don't need any reiattou, I am the weapon myself,''
Bearing the injuries on his body, Colt still does not want to give up on hope. He is prepare for the next fight at all cost.
''It's the first time that I witness such special form of First Tear,'' Colt says to himself.
"I gotta find a way to end him,''
Standing before an almost 15 feet tall giant, Colt has only one way to win this battle, and he decides it.
''[First Tear, Thirst Wolf]'' Says Colt calmly.
Right at the moment, Gonzhuca's fists already crush them with almighty force. Colt is lucky to have just dodges it right on time. Then, his blood wolves start to spawn. All with the demonic look developed on their faces, lusting for blood.
''It's show time, go!'' Yells Colt while pointing at Gonzhuca.
All the blood wolves started rushing towards Gonzhuca while barking. Gonzhuca tries to get rid of them by slamming his fists against them, but more and more wolves just keep on coming. Soon enough, dozens of wolves are biting his arms and legs. Gonzhuca, having a hard time to flick them away, he pounds his fists against the ground.
All the wolves immediately fly away and crashes onto the ground nearby.
Colt's face is now a mix of serious and focus.
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Not far away from the battle, stands Darucard and his opponent.
''What's that huge thing right over there?'' Asks Darucard sarcastically.
''It's Gonzhuca, in his First Tear,'' Replies his opponent calmly, that yellow hair and yellow eyebrows of him are seriously intriguing.
Darucard then turns his face against his opponent again. His opponent suddenly gives him a tired look.
''Come on, aren't you going to tell me your name?'' Asks the Shinigami.
Darucard immediately dashes towards him without saying anything.
''Gasps, I guess that's a NO,'' Says the Shinigami to himself.
He then blocks away Darucard's blow and pushes him aside. Darucard immediately regains his balance and djinns towards the Shinigami again.
This time, the Shinigami starts talking. Darucard then stops dead at his track and stares at him.
''The heaven's gate, the hell's door. All the waves, sits upon me and become my shield. All the lightnings, bow before me and become my blade. Fulfill my destiny, and I shall set your free. [First Tear, Ghoul Leg of Severing Razor]''
The Shinigami's reiattou starts to transform into a weird-looking blade and shield. The blade has 3 sharp ends which differs into pointing left, middle and right, and the shield is black and white in colour. His blade suddenly starts to glow.
''What's that all about?'' Asks Darucard sarcastically.
''My First Tear, aren't you watching just now?'' Says the Shinigami, with a grin.
''Sorry, too busy to look at such cheap things,'' Replies Darucard while looking away from him.
The Shinigami didn't get angry at all, he just smiles and points his blade at Darucard.
''Die,''
He releases his blade and the blade separated into three different blades and starts to glide towards Darucard.
Darucard is surprised by the unique attack. He jumps upward but the three blades just keep on following him.
The Shinigami then burst out an sinister laughter while Darucard is busy dodging the blades.
''No point running, the outcome is still the same!'' Yells the Shinigami.
Then out of no where, a reiattou pierces through his stomach. Blood starts flowing down. He is stunned by the surprising attack.
''What... is... it?'' Says the Shinigami, slowly.
Darucard is seen stabbing his reiattou into his own shadow. With a serious look on his face.
** Stay tuned for next chapter. **
Friday, September 24, 2010
Thursday, September 23, 2010
Chapter 15: Mister, Take Your Time
** One shall rise, and another one shall fall. **
The black dusts is gliding towards Ruri in an unbelievable speed. She is having a hard time to outrun those dusts although she djinns and dodging it all the way throughout the whole field.
''Prepare to fall underneath my wrath!'' Yells Avalor.
Just when the dusts of blades are about to reach Ruri, she djinns backwards and dashes towards Avalor. But Avalor stands still, when Ruri is about to swing her Byeorrun Gum against him, the black dusts spawn right in front Ruri. Shocked by the surprising ambush, Ruri slams herself into the ground while trying to stop her from dashing into the blade dusts.
Ruri is kneeling on the muddy ground with bruises all over her legs and hands, and she stares right at Avalor with an angry look.
''Don't give me that kind of face, come on,'' Says Avalor sarcastically.
Ruri then yells out a loud battle cry and dashes towards Avalor again with her Byeorrun Gum. But again, Avalor blocks her path with the blade dusts again. Soon, she is surrounded by the black dusts, trying to swallow her alive. Ruri is trapped, this time, she really encounter a nervous breakdown. She turns her head all round and look at the black dusts closing in towards her, and she can't do anything about it. She can't jump out of it since she is trapped in a sphere-like blade dusts trap.
''Crap,'' Ruri says to herself.
Right at this crucial moment, a voice appears out of no where.
''Ruri, Ruri,'' Says the unknown but familiar female voice, deeply.
''Huh? You again, who are you?!'' Says Ruri to herself.
''You don't know who am I?''
''Your voices, are familiar,''
''I'm your reiattou, Byeorrun Gum,'' Says the female voice.
Ruri suddenly felt a huge jolt of surprising chill went through her whole body. Although she doesn't know where is the voice from, but she certainly knew that the voice, is a friendly one.
''Connect,'' Says the voice again.
"Huh?''
''Connect yourself to me, Ruri,''
Ruri felt the reiattous in both of her hands are shaking wildly. She can feel it. She starts to close up both her eyes, and starts to communicate and connect with the reiattous. Then, the unexpected happens.
A huge blast of reiatsu energy breaks through the blade dusts. Avalor is shocked to see what had just happened right in front of his eyes. There, stood before him, is Ruri again. But she's different, her eyes are different. Avalor can feel the hatred and anger shooting out from her both her eyes. He can feel the cold stare.
There are unexplainable energy releasing from Ruri's body. An aura. Ruri is holding both her reiattous this time confidently. Then she says, ''Byeorrun Gum, Divine Berserk,''
She dashes towards Avalor in lightning speed. Avalor quickly summons the black dusts in front of him to protect him from the vicious attack from Ruri. But, Ruri breaks through the dusts into piece easily just by slashing it.
She is inches away from Avalor, and he doesn't have any weapon in both his hands. He summons the black dusts again but this time it's too late. Both Ruri's reiattous is right in front of his body.
A cut is all she needs. That blow lands Avalor on the ground. He is lying on the ground, almost dead. He tries to reach his hand out again to summon the black dusts, but he is too exhausted to even move his hand.
Ruri turns her back away from him and walk away. He stares at the back of Ruri, and slowly, he closes up his eyes.
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Back to the sky, the four Shinigamis are still standing there.
''Poor Avalor,'' Says Jyuro, with that sad look on his face.
''He deserves it,'' Says Tanos with a grin.
Beruda once again stands at the back of the three of them without saying anything, and then, Lute speaks, while the three of them turn their heads to her.
''Let's go,'' Says Lute with a calm and serious face.
''Are you serious, Master?!'' Says Jyuro with a surprising and exciting voice.
Lute nods her head. Right at the moment, Tanos and Jyuro straight djinns away and appears out of sight. Beruda still doesn't move his feet at all.
''Are you sure?'' Says Beruda to Lute.
''We lost three men, I think this is the time,''
''Well then, I shall finish this in a second,'' Says Beruda and then he djinns away.
Lute then stares on the battle field below her, at Ruri.
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A pair of leg stands beside the unconsious body of Lylford. A very familiar outfit, its Cain. He finally found his away back to the farm house.
''Kidou of Healing, Regenerate'' Says Cain while summoning the glowing shield to surround Lylford.
''Dont worry,'' Whispers Cain to the unconscious Lylford.
Cain then turn his head up and look at a figure from a far distance, it's Strouff. He then djinns towads him.
Strouff is staring at the lying Tetsuo, with his reiattou ready to crush right down.
''Kill me, do it!'' Says Tetsuo in agony.
''Don't be so hasty, I will, don't you worry,'' Says Strouff sarcastically.
Then, a reiattou swings towards Strouff out of no where. Strouff jumps backwards and dodges it right on time. He then look at the familiar figure.
''Oh, it's you, Cain, long time no see,'' Says Strouff with an evil grin.
It's the first time Cain is shown holding a reiattou. Although it's the same look as the others, but the shaft colour is blue. Cain then look at the lying Tetsuo, and look back up at Strouff.
''I'm going to kill you,'' Says Cain with a serious voice.
**Stay tuned for the next chapter.**
The black dusts is gliding towards Ruri in an unbelievable speed. She is having a hard time to outrun those dusts although she djinns and dodging it all the way throughout the whole field.
''Prepare to fall underneath my wrath!'' Yells Avalor.
Just when the dusts of blades are about to reach Ruri, she djinns backwards and dashes towards Avalor. But Avalor stands still, when Ruri is about to swing her Byeorrun Gum against him, the black dusts spawn right in front Ruri. Shocked by the surprising ambush, Ruri slams herself into the ground while trying to stop her from dashing into the blade dusts.
Ruri is kneeling on the muddy ground with bruises all over her legs and hands, and she stares right at Avalor with an angry look.
''Don't give me that kind of face, come on,'' Says Avalor sarcastically.
Ruri then yells out a loud battle cry and dashes towards Avalor again with her Byeorrun Gum. But again, Avalor blocks her path with the blade dusts again. Soon, she is surrounded by the black dusts, trying to swallow her alive. Ruri is trapped, this time, she really encounter a nervous breakdown. She turns her head all round and look at the black dusts closing in towards her, and she can't do anything about it. She can't jump out of it since she is trapped in a sphere-like blade dusts trap.
''Crap,'' Ruri says to herself.
Right at this crucial moment, a voice appears out of no where.
''Ruri, Ruri,'' Says the unknown but familiar female voice, deeply.
''Huh? You again, who are you?!'' Says Ruri to herself.
''You don't know who am I?''
''Your voices, are familiar,''
''I'm your reiattou, Byeorrun Gum,'' Says the female voice.
Ruri suddenly felt a huge jolt of surprising chill went through her whole body. Although she doesn't know where is the voice from, but she certainly knew that the voice, is a friendly one.
''Connect,'' Says the voice again.
"Huh?''
''Connect yourself to me, Ruri,''
Ruri felt the reiattous in both of her hands are shaking wildly. She can feel it. She starts to close up both her eyes, and starts to communicate and connect with the reiattous. Then, the unexpected happens.
A huge blast of reiatsu energy breaks through the blade dusts. Avalor is shocked to see what had just happened right in front of his eyes. There, stood before him, is Ruri again. But she's different, her eyes are different. Avalor can feel the hatred and anger shooting out from her both her eyes. He can feel the cold stare.
There are unexplainable energy releasing from Ruri's body. An aura. Ruri is holding both her reiattous this time confidently. Then she says, ''Byeorrun Gum, Divine Berserk,''
She dashes towards Avalor in lightning speed. Avalor quickly summons the black dusts in front of him to protect him from the vicious attack from Ruri. But, Ruri breaks through the dusts into piece easily just by slashing it.
She is inches away from Avalor, and he doesn't have any weapon in both his hands. He summons the black dusts again but this time it's too late. Both Ruri's reiattous is right in front of his body.
A cut is all she needs. That blow lands Avalor on the ground. He is lying on the ground, almost dead. He tries to reach his hand out again to summon the black dusts, but he is too exhausted to even move his hand.
Ruri turns her back away from him and walk away. He stares at the back of Ruri, and slowly, he closes up his eyes.
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Back to the sky, the four Shinigamis are still standing there.
''Poor Avalor,'' Says Jyuro, with that sad look on his face.
''He deserves it,'' Says Tanos with a grin.
Beruda once again stands at the back of the three of them without saying anything, and then, Lute speaks, while the three of them turn their heads to her.
''Let's go,'' Says Lute with a calm and serious face.
''Are you serious, Master?!'' Says Jyuro with a surprising and exciting voice.
Lute nods her head. Right at the moment, Tanos and Jyuro straight djinns away and appears out of sight. Beruda still doesn't move his feet at all.
''Are you sure?'' Says Beruda to Lute.
''We lost three men, I think this is the time,''
''Well then, I shall finish this in a second,'' Says Beruda and then he djinns away.
Lute then stares on the battle field below her, at Ruri.
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A pair of leg stands beside the unconsious body of Lylford. A very familiar outfit, its Cain. He finally found his away back to the farm house.
''Kidou of Healing, Regenerate'' Says Cain while summoning the glowing shield to surround Lylford.
''Dont worry,'' Whispers Cain to the unconscious Lylford.
Cain then turn his head up and look at a figure from a far distance, it's Strouff. He then djinns towads him.
Strouff is staring at the lying Tetsuo, with his reiattou ready to crush right down.
''Kill me, do it!'' Says Tetsuo in agony.
''Don't be so hasty, I will, don't you worry,'' Says Strouff sarcastically.
Then, a reiattou swings towards Strouff out of no where. Strouff jumps backwards and dodges it right on time. He then look at the familiar figure.
''Oh, it's you, Cain, long time no see,'' Says Strouff with an evil grin.
It's the first time Cain is shown holding a reiattou. Although it's the same look as the others, but the shaft colour is blue. Cain then look at the lying Tetsuo, and look back up at Strouff.
''I'm going to kill you,'' Says Cain with a serious voice.
**Stay tuned for the next chapter.**
Friday, September 17, 2010
Chapter 14: Enclosing Danger
** All to dust. **
Out of no where, Tetsuo djinns in and pushes Lylford away. The giant blast of reiatsu energy passes righ through Tetsuo's thigh. Tetsuo is seen screaming in awful pain as his thigh bleed violently.
"Hold on! Tetsuo,'' Yells Lylford.
Zigedich then falls to the ground aimlessly. He is not dead yet, but just too exhausted to stand at all.
''You bastard Shinigami!'' Yells Lylford and he rushes towards the lying Zigedich while ready to finish him off with his arrow.
Suddenly, a Shinigami djinns in. He slams Lylford's face with his palm and sends Lylford flying away with a great force. Lylford then crashes onto a tree nearby.
''Lylford!!!'' Yells Tetsuo in pain.
The Shinigami is Strouff. The one that was standing in the air with the other four Shinigamis back then.
Strouff then turn his head towards the lying Zigedich. He starts to walk towards him until he is stood near Zigedich.
Zigedich struggles to move his body. He loses all his reiatsu due to firing his beretta twice with a huge amount of reiatsu. Strouff stands beside Zigedich's face.
''You impotent trash,'' Whispers Strouff.
Then Strouff kicks Zigedich right at his face with a giant force. Zigedich flies away from the scene and crashes into the farm house. That fatal blow kills Zigedich.
Strouff then set his eyes at the lying Tetsuo.
''Now, what should I do to you,'' Says Strouff, while grinning.
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On the sky, the other four Shinigamis watch.
''Master Strouff had finally made his move,'' Says Tanos with an evil smile, and he continues, ''The Chieftain of 7th Division.''
Those words indicated that both Tanos and Panos along with Zigedich are the Vice Chieftains of 7th Division.
''So?'' Says the other male Shinigami that have been silence for all these times.
''Hoi, Beruda, you finally opened up your mouth, I thought you are mute for all these times,'' Says Jyuro sarcastically.
Tanos then grabs Beruda's shirt, showing a very angry face,
''What do you mean by 'So', you bastard,'' Yells Tanos.
''Take your hand away from me or else I can't promise what will happen to you,'' Says Beruda with a calm face.
Tanos then releases his hand and walks away from him. He is trying to cool down his rage.
''Master, Strouff is already attacking, what should we do now?'' Says Jyuro while looking at Lute.
''We'll just wait,'' Says Lute with an emotionless face.
''Wait, again!?'' Says Jyuro while showing that ridiculous face.
Lute didn't say anything after that. She stares down on the ground, at Ruri.
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Ruri is holding her reiattou while breathing heavily. She seems to be exhausted from fighting against her opponent.
''Given up?'' Asks the Shinigami sarcastically. With that messy brown hair and a beard under his mouth.
''Not so fast,''
Ruri then djinns to the back of the Shinigami, while swinging her reiattou towards him, he kicks Ruri away with his right feet.
Ruri tries to steady herself while flying in the air and then she drops on the ground with both her legs kneeling on the ground.
''I'm glad that I can lay my feet on your body, Ruri Michalka,'' Says the Shinigami while grinning.
Ruri is scared. She doesn't know what she shall do next. She is scared that she will lose in this battle. Which might costs her life. She is scared, deep inside her heart.
She lifts her head up, staring straight at her opponent, along with that 'Decided' face.
''[First Tear, Byeorrun Gum]''Shouts Ruri while releasing her First Tear.
That two beautiful reiattou is shown again in both of her hands. Her opponent is amazed by what he had just witnessed.
''Oh, so that's your reiattou in your First Tear form, interesting,'' Says the Shinigami.
Ruri didn't say anything and right away dashes towards the Shinigami. She jumps and spins in the air while swinging both her reiattous towards the Shinigami. The Shinigami quickly djinns to on top of her.
Ruri is shocked at the speed of her opponent, the Shinigami almost landed a fatal blow down across her stomach but Ruri dodges it just in time.
The Shinigami then grins, and rushes towards Ruri again. Just when he is closing in to Ruri, he djinns again. He is now behind Ruri. But Ruri blocks off his attack with her right reiattou, Byeorrun. After that, Ruri immediately swings her left hand towards the Shinigami, that attack cuts through the skin of the Shinigami's right cheek. The Shinigami quickly djinns away from her.
The Shinigami then touches his face. Blood starts to flow down from the shallow wound. He then smiles,
''Such amazing speed, little girl,'' Says the Shinigami.
Ruri again, stands still on the ground and didn't utter a single word at all. Her long and golden hair is seen blowing by the wind along with holding her First Tear in both of her hands.
''Then, I shall let you witness my true power,'' Says the Shinigami with a deep voice.
Ruri's eyes open up a little after hearing those words. She knows something bad is going to happen just in a few seconds.
The Shinigami stand still right on his track,
''[First Tear, Nymph of Dust]'' Says the Shinigami.
His reiattou is then dissolves into thin dusts and soon enough, his reiattou disappears from his hand.
Ruri is shocked by what she had just saw. She grips on to her reiattous even harder and ready to make her next move.
''Don't you dare come close to me,'' Taunts the Shinigami while holding nothing in his hand.
Ruri immediately dashes towards the Shinigami while shouting a battle cry. Just when she is close in to the Shinigami, a mysterious fume of dusts starts to surround the Shinigami.
Ruri immediately stops dead on her track. She can't tell what is that 'thing' that are moving and floating around the Shinigami.
''Surprised? That's my reiattou,'' Grins the Shinigami, he then continues,
''God gave me such unique power, the ability of my First Tear is transferring my reiattou to hundreds of thousands of thin and tiny blades thus making it looks like a pile of black dusts. But actually, all of them are the sharp blades of my reiattou,'' The Shinigami then bursts into an evil laughter.
Ruri then lifts her right reiattou up and point it towards the Shinigami.
''It doesn't matter at all, I will still be the one who kills you,'' Says Ruri confidently.
Those words make the Shinigami even angrier, he then point his hand towards Ruri, and the fume of thin black dusts start to glide towards Ruri in high speed.
''I, Avalor Delviccha, the Vice Chieftain of 4th Division, is the only one who can defeats you,'' Yells the Shinigami in a sinister voice thus telling Ruri his name and his position in the Shinigami Clan.
** Stay tuned for next chapter. **
Out of no where, Tetsuo djinns in and pushes Lylford away. The giant blast of reiatsu energy passes righ through Tetsuo's thigh. Tetsuo is seen screaming in awful pain as his thigh bleed violently.
"Hold on! Tetsuo,'' Yells Lylford.
Zigedich then falls to the ground aimlessly. He is not dead yet, but just too exhausted to stand at all.
''You bastard Shinigami!'' Yells Lylford and he rushes towards the lying Zigedich while ready to finish him off with his arrow.
Suddenly, a Shinigami djinns in. He slams Lylford's face with his palm and sends Lylford flying away with a great force. Lylford then crashes onto a tree nearby.
''Lylford!!!'' Yells Tetsuo in pain.
The Shinigami is Strouff. The one that was standing in the air with the other four Shinigamis back then.
Strouff then turn his head towards the lying Zigedich. He starts to walk towards him until he is stood near Zigedich.
Zigedich struggles to move his body. He loses all his reiatsu due to firing his beretta twice with a huge amount of reiatsu. Strouff stands beside Zigedich's face.
''You impotent trash,'' Whispers Strouff.
Then Strouff kicks Zigedich right at his face with a giant force. Zigedich flies away from the scene and crashes into the farm house. That fatal blow kills Zigedich.
Strouff then set his eyes at the lying Tetsuo.
''Now, what should I do to you,'' Says Strouff, while grinning.
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On the sky, the other four Shinigamis watch.
''Master Strouff had finally made his move,'' Says Tanos with an evil smile, and he continues, ''The Chieftain of 7th Division.''
Those words indicated that both Tanos and Panos along with Zigedich are the Vice Chieftains of 7th Division.
''So?'' Says the other male Shinigami that have been silence for all these times.
''Hoi, Beruda, you finally opened up your mouth, I thought you are mute for all these times,'' Says Jyuro sarcastically.
Tanos then grabs Beruda's shirt, showing a very angry face,
''What do you mean by 'So', you bastard,'' Yells Tanos.
''Take your hand away from me or else I can't promise what will happen to you,'' Says Beruda with a calm face.
Tanos then releases his hand and walks away from him. He is trying to cool down his rage.
''Master, Strouff is already attacking, what should we do now?'' Says Jyuro while looking at Lute.
''We'll just wait,'' Says Lute with an emotionless face.
''Wait, again!?'' Says Jyuro while showing that ridiculous face.
Lute didn't say anything after that. She stares down on the ground, at Ruri.
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Ruri is holding her reiattou while breathing heavily. She seems to be exhausted from fighting against her opponent.
''Given up?'' Asks the Shinigami sarcastically. With that messy brown hair and a beard under his mouth.
''Not so fast,''
Ruri then djinns to the back of the Shinigami, while swinging her reiattou towards him, he kicks Ruri away with his right feet.
Ruri tries to steady herself while flying in the air and then she drops on the ground with both her legs kneeling on the ground.
''I'm glad that I can lay my feet on your body, Ruri Michalka,'' Says the Shinigami while grinning.
Ruri is scared. She doesn't know what she shall do next. She is scared that she will lose in this battle. Which might costs her life. She is scared, deep inside her heart.
She lifts her head up, staring straight at her opponent, along with that 'Decided' face.
''[First Tear, Byeorrun Gum]''Shouts Ruri while releasing her First Tear.
That two beautiful reiattou is shown again in both of her hands. Her opponent is amazed by what he had just witnessed.
''Oh, so that's your reiattou in your First Tear form, interesting,'' Says the Shinigami.
Ruri didn't say anything and right away dashes towards the Shinigami. She jumps and spins in the air while swinging both her reiattous towards the Shinigami. The Shinigami quickly djinns to on top of her.
Ruri is shocked at the speed of her opponent, the Shinigami almost landed a fatal blow down across her stomach but Ruri dodges it just in time.
The Shinigami then grins, and rushes towards Ruri again. Just when he is closing in to Ruri, he djinns again. He is now behind Ruri. But Ruri blocks off his attack with her right reiattou, Byeorrun. After that, Ruri immediately swings her left hand towards the Shinigami, that attack cuts through the skin of the Shinigami's right cheek. The Shinigami quickly djinns away from her.
The Shinigami then touches his face. Blood starts to flow down from the shallow wound. He then smiles,
''Such amazing speed, little girl,'' Says the Shinigami.
Ruri again, stands still on the ground and didn't utter a single word at all. Her long and golden hair is seen blowing by the wind along with holding her First Tear in both of her hands.
''Then, I shall let you witness my true power,'' Says the Shinigami with a deep voice.
Ruri's eyes open up a little after hearing those words. She knows something bad is going to happen just in a few seconds.
The Shinigami stand still right on his track,
''[First Tear, Nymph of Dust]'' Says the Shinigami.
His reiattou is then dissolves into thin dusts and soon enough, his reiattou disappears from his hand.
Ruri is shocked by what she had just saw. She grips on to her reiattous even harder and ready to make her next move.
''Don't you dare come close to me,'' Taunts the Shinigami while holding nothing in his hand.
Ruri immediately dashes towards the Shinigami while shouting a battle cry. Just when she is close in to the Shinigami, a mysterious fume of dusts starts to surround the Shinigami.
Ruri immediately stops dead on her track. She can't tell what is that 'thing' that are moving and floating around the Shinigami.
''Surprised? That's my reiattou,'' Grins the Shinigami, he then continues,
''God gave me such unique power, the ability of my First Tear is transferring my reiattou to hundreds of thousands of thin and tiny blades thus making it looks like a pile of black dusts. But actually, all of them are the sharp blades of my reiattou,'' The Shinigami then bursts into an evil laughter.
Ruri then lifts her right reiattou up and point it towards the Shinigami.
''It doesn't matter at all, I will still be the one who kills you,'' Says Ruri confidently.
Those words make the Shinigami even angrier, he then point his hand towards Ruri, and the fume of thin black dusts start to glide towards Ruri in high speed.
''I, Avalor Delviccha, the Vice Chieftain of 4th Division, is the only one who can defeats you,'' Yells the Shinigami in a sinister voice thus telling Ruri his name and his position in the Shinigami Clan.
** Stay tuned for next chapter. **
Sunday, September 12, 2010
Chapter 13: The Hellish Overture
** It's five against the world. **
The pillars of lighting were immediately and easily blocked away by the Shinigami's reiattou. Tetsuo jumps back and is kinda shocked by the mere toughness of his opponent. The Shinigami stands still, with a grin on his face.
''Such skinny guy but what kind of power was that?'' Tetsuo thinks to himself.
''I see that you're kinda surprised of my strength, isn't it?'' Says the Shinigami.
Tetsuo remains silence, he instantly djinns zigzagly and at the same time, shooting pillars of lightning strikes out from his palm. The Shinigami dodges them easily without even using djinns. He just move his body smoothly as if he knew he can dodge them all accurately.
Tetsuo then djinns to the front of the Shinigami, the Shinigami immediately swing his reiattou towards Tetsuo. Surprisingly, a short dagger blocks his attack.
Tetsuo is seen holding a glowing blue dagger with his left hand. Just when the Shinigami is about going to say something, Tetsuo attacks him again. This time swinging his dagger towards the Shinigami while blasting out lightning from his right palm. The Shinigami starts to find it's getting harder to dodge Tetsuo's attack and evetually, he djinns away.
''Finally, ya djinns,'' Says Tetsuo, with that serious look that he rarely shows.
''Don't get too excited,'' Answers the Shinigami.
''You thought that my First Tear is in a long range magic type form, but you're wrong. You see, Azoth always come in handy when I'm engaging a close combat with my foe,'' Says Tetsuo as he throws the dagger to the air and then catches it.
''So, Azoth is the name of that filthy little short blade,'' Says the Shinigami, while staring at Tetsuo's dagger.
Tetsuo then throws the dagger towards the Shinigami. While the dagger is still in the air gliding towards him.
''You don't think that kinda low-level attack can harm me? You, my friend, is pathetic!'' Shouts the Shinigami as he dodges the dagger easily.
But then, the dagger turns its back. That short blade he was talking about, went right through his heart.
''What...was... that...'' Says the struggling Shinigami, and he continues, ''Did that piece of worthless short blade just turn its back...?''
Tetsuo remains silence again. Seems like he is tired of talking to the Shinigami. But then, he finally opened up his mouth, ''Azoth is fully under my control. She is created and fused with my reiatsu completely. There ya go, a simple explanation for ya,''
''This is... ridiculous,'' The Shinigami then collapses onto the ground, indicating that he is dead.
On the sky, the five other Shinigamis watches.
''Panos, you bastard,'' Says a male Shinigami angrily, while staring at the ground where the Shinigami has been defeated by Tetsuo, indicating that the deceased Shinigami's name is Panos.
''Tanos, your brother has been defeated by a random guy in this land,'' Says another Shinigami, with an insulting voice.
''Shut up, Strouff. That worthless brother, he is better off dead,'' Says Tanos with an angry face, and then he continues, ''He always sort things out on his own, and his greedy attitude, it disgusts me,''
''Well, I never know you hated your brother that much,'' Says Lute sarcastically.
''What should we do now? I'm getting bored,'' Says Jyuro, and then he sneezes. ''Gosh, and it's seriously cold up here, I can't wait to go down there and kick some asses,''
''We'll just wait,'' Answers Lute with a serious face.
''Okay then, since you're the only woman here, we'll wait,'' Says Strouff, the other Shinigami with an unsatisfying voice.
On the ground, others are still battling their own opponent.
A few blasts of red reiatsu enegry is seen shooting out from a beretta. Lylford is having a hard time against his own opponent, Zigedich Gesell. Lylford djinns around trying to dodge all the shots from Zigedich and at the same time, he fires out arrow from his bow too.
''Weak arrows, they cant do no harm!'' Says Zigedich with an excited face.
''We'll see then... Meteor Shower of Death!' Shouts Lylford as he distant himself from Zigedich.
Zigedich is surprised with that attack. Uncountable numbers of arrows immediately fly towards Zigedich in lightning speed. Zigedich keeps on djinns and dodging those arrows.
At the same time, Lylford djinns to all sorts of directions and blast his arrows in order to make Zigedich trapped.
''Not so fast!'' Shouts Zigedich, then he turns his back and stand facing towards all the arrows flying at him. His beretta is shown generating its own reiatsu power, it starts to glow.
Just when those arrows almost got him, he fires out a gigantic blast of reiatsu with his beretta. Destroying everything in front of him. All the arrows are gone in a blink of an eye. Lylford merely dodges the powerful blast.
Zigedich starts to breath harder after firing that shot.
''Interesting,'' Says Lylford surprisingly.
''That's the uniqueness of Right Hand of Epsilon,'' answers Zigedich.
''I see, but I can also see that it drains away your reiatsu,'' Grins Lylford.
Those words struck Zigedich like a lightning. He knew that now his opponent had learnt about his weakness. That blast drained away almost half of his reiatsu. That blast weaken him.
Lylford immediately moves in and again start shooting arrows towards Zigedich. This time Zigedich struggles to dodge all the arrows. One of the arrow went just a little through the right side of his cheek, and starts to bleed slowly.
Lylford then djinns to the front of Zigedich, and pointing his bow right at the face of Zigedich. Zigedich's face turned from serious to a sudden nervous break down.
''Any last words?'' Says Lylford.
''Yeah...''
''What is it?''
''Go, to, HELL!''
The beretta of Zigedich starts to generate and glow again. This time its even faster. He then lifts his right hand up.
Right at that moment, a huge blast of red reiatsu energy shoots out right from the beretta of Zigedich.
**What will happen to Lylford? Stay tuned for next chapter.**
The pillars of lighting were immediately and easily blocked away by the Shinigami's reiattou. Tetsuo jumps back and is kinda shocked by the mere toughness of his opponent. The Shinigami stands still, with a grin on his face.
''Such skinny guy but what kind of power was that?'' Tetsuo thinks to himself.
''I see that you're kinda surprised of my strength, isn't it?'' Says the Shinigami.
Tetsuo remains silence, he instantly djinns zigzagly and at the same time, shooting pillars of lightning strikes out from his palm. The Shinigami dodges them easily without even using djinns. He just move his body smoothly as if he knew he can dodge them all accurately.
Tetsuo then djinns to the front of the Shinigami, the Shinigami immediately swing his reiattou towards Tetsuo. Surprisingly, a short dagger blocks his attack.
Tetsuo is seen holding a glowing blue dagger with his left hand. Just when the Shinigami is about going to say something, Tetsuo attacks him again. This time swinging his dagger towards the Shinigami while blasting out lightning from his right palm. The Shinigami starts to find it's getting harder to dodge Tetsuo's attack and evetually, he djinns away.
''Finally, ya djinns,'' Says Tetsuo, with that serious look that he rarely shows.
''Don't get too excited,'' Answers the Shinigami.
''You thought that my First Tear is in a long range magic type form, but you're wrong. You see, Azoth always come in handy when I'm engaging a close combat with my foe,'' Says Tetsuo as he throws the dagger to the air and then catches it.
''So, Azoth is the name of that filthy little short blade,'' Says the Shinigami, while staring at Tetsuo's dagger.
Tetsuo then throws the dagger towards the Shinigami. While the dagger is still in the air gliding towards him.
''You don't think that kinda low-level attack can harm me? You, my friend, is pathetic!'' Shouts the Shinigami as he dodges the dagger easily.
But then, the dagger turns its back. That short blade he was talking about, went right through his heart.
''What...was... that...'' Says the struggling Shinigami, and he continues, ''Did that piece of worthless short blade just turn its back...?''
Tetsuo remains silence again. Seems like he is tired of talking to the Shinigami. But then, he finally opened up his mouth, ''Azoth is fully under my control. She is created and fused with my reiatsu completely. There ya go, a simple explanation for ya,''
''This is... ridiculous,'' The Shinigami then collapses onto the ground, indicating that he is dead.
On the sky, the five other Shinigamis watches.
''Panos, you bastard,'' Says a male Shinigami angrily, while staring at the ground where the Shinigami has been defeated by Tetsuo, indicating that the deceased Shinigami's name is Panos.
''Tanos, your brother has been defeated by a random guy in this land,'' Says another Shinigami, with an insulting voice.
''Shut up, Strouff. That worthless brother, he is better off dead,'' Says Tanos with an angry face, and then he continues, ''He always sort things out on his own, and his greedy attitude, it disgusts me,''
''Well, I never know you hated your brother that much,'' Says Lute sarcastically.
''What should we do now? I'm getting bored,'' Says Jyuro, and then he sneezes. ''Gosh, and it's seriously cold up here, I can't wait to go down there and kick some asses,''
''We'll just wait,'' Answers Lute with a serious face.
''Okay then, since you're the only woman here, we'll wait,'' Says Strouff, the other Shinigami with an unsatisfying voice.
On the ground, others are still battling their own opponent.
A few blasts of red reiatsu enegry is seen shooting out from a beretta. Lylford is having a hard time against his own opponent, Zigedich Gesell. Lylford djinns around trying to dodge all the shots from Zigedich and at the same time, he fires out arrow from his bow too.
''Weak arrows, they cant do no harm!'' Says Zigedich with an excited face.
''We'll see then... Meteor Shower of Death!' Shouts Lylford as he distant himself from Zigedich.
Zigedich is surprised with that attack. Uncountable numbers of arrows immediately fly towards Zigedich in lightning speed. Zigedich keeps on djinns and dodging those arrows.
At the same time, Lylford djinns to all sorts of directions and blast his arrows in order to make Zigedich trapped.
''Not so fast!'' Shouts Zigedich, then he turns his back and stand facing towards all the arrows flying at him. His beretta is shown generating its own reiatsu power, it starts to glow.
Just when those arrows almost got him, he fires out a gigantic blast of reiatsu with his beretta. Destroying everything in front of him. All the arrows are gone in a blink of an eye. Lylford merely dodges the powerful blast.
Zigedich starts to breath harder after firing that shot.
''Interesting,'' Says Lylford surprisingly.
''That's the uniqueness of Right Hand of Epsilon,'' answers Zigedich.
''I see, but I can also see that it drains away your reiatsu,'' Grins Lylford.
Those words struck Zigedich like a lightning. He knew that now his opponent had learnt about his weakness. That blast drained away almost half of his reiatsu. That blast weaken him.
Lylford immediately moves in and again start shooting arrows towards Zigedich. This time Zigedich struggles to dodge all the arrows. One of the arrow went just a little through the right side of his cheek, and starts to bleed slowly.
Lylford then djinns to the front of Zigedich, and pointing his bow right at the face of Zigedich. Zigedich's face turned from serious to a sudden nervous break down.
''Any last words?'' Says Lylford.
''Yeah...''
''What is it?''
''Go, to, HELL!''
The beretta of Zigedich starts to generate and glow again. This time its even faster. He then lifts his right hand up.
Right at that moment, a huge blast of red reiatsu energy shoots out right from the beretta of Zigedich.
**What will happen to Lylford? Stay tuned for next chapter.**
Friday, September 10, 2010
Chapter 12: Let's Play Long Range
For readers: I will change back the dialogue style and also try to increase the length of a chapter.
** I can't see your face, it's not here, nor in the dark. Define your own words, with your own swords. **
Cain is struggling to find his way back to the farm house. He djinns towards the end of the forest. He is blinded by the nervousness and the darkness of his past. A sudden pain strikes across his stomach.
'' Argh, goddamn it,'' Says Cain while pressing his hand on his stomach.
Normally he can get out from this forest just in a blink of a time. But not today, not, today...
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In front of the farm house, the fellowship of the Shinigamis stood still. Each and everyone of them bear the same objective, to destroy Ruri and her comrades and achieve their plan.
''Hoi! Gonzhucha, That spiky hair is mine,'' Says an unknown Shinigami confidently.
''Up to you,'' Replied Gonzhucha, another Shinigami. ''Looks like the short one, is mine,'' He is staring at Colt.
On the other hand, Tetsuo stood along with Colt.
''Hey Tetsuo,'' Calls Colt.
''What?'' Asks Tetsuo without looking at him.
''Are you nervous?''
''All I can say is, nope, I'm not,''
''Very good,'' Says Colt. ''Then they shall all lie underneath my blade!'' Shouts Colt as he rushes towards the Shinigami he is facing with.
Lastly, Ruri is standing alone. While her companions are all facing their opponents. And then, comes another Shinigami, with brown hair in a messy fasion and a dark beard just right underneath his mouth.
''You must be the girl they are all talking about,'' Says the Shinigami while summoning his reiattou.
''Well, thanks. I can't believe that I'm so famous nowadays, everyone is talking about me huh?'' Says Ruri sarcastically.
''Then, I'm glad that because I will be the one to kill you,'' Replied the Shinigami.
'' We'll see then,'' Ruri summons her reiattou and djinns towards the Shinigami.
And so, the battle is on. Five Shinigamis against Ruri, Darucard, Colt, Lylford and Tetsuo.
Lylford is having a hard time against his opponent, Zigedich. Tetsuo is already holding his First Tear, Hell Star Shower Bite.
''Is that all you've got? It pains me to see that you are now suffering,'' Taunts Zigedich, the 7th Division Vice Chieftain.
''It's not over yet!'' Lylford then djinns back and forth thus creating a lot of illusions of his, with lightning speed.
Zigedich is seem shocked by Lylford's surprising attack.
''Which one is the real one? Damn it!'' Thinks Zigedich. He randomly picked a target and rushes towards it.
Zigedich swings his reiattou towards the figure of Lylford but it vanishes. And then behind of him, an arrow shoots out of no where wounded his right hand. Zigedich then jumps back while holding his hand against the wound, it's bleeding.
''Tch! Cheap skills like this can't harm me,'' Says Zigedich with a cocky voice while pointing the reiattou to Lylford, whom is now standing alone.
''You've underestimated me. You see, my First Tear, Hell Star Shower Bite, doesn't just give me long range advantage of attacking, it gives me speed too, and it's hella of speed,'' Says Lylford.
Zigedich didn't say a single word. He grips on his reiattou tighter and tigther. But then, Lylford is right in front his face, with a bow pointing right at him.
''Good bye,'' Says Lylford, with a smile.
That attack creates an explosion, thus creating fumes of smokes. Lylford is standing aside and staring into the pile of gray air. Expecting that he has beaten his opponent.
And then there are choking voices coming out from the smoke. Lylford is shocked to still see his opponent is still standing. And the shadow started to emerge out from the gray air.
This time he is carrying a gun. His outfit has changed. Red coat and a long and tight red pants, but still with that black hair, long on the left side.. He grins. Lylford stares at his ''new'' opponent emotionlessly.
''Well, you think you are the only one that excels in long range attack? You're so wrong,'' Grins Zigedich. Then he continues,
''This is my [First Tear, Right Hand of Epsilon],'' Says Zigedich while holding his First Tear with his right hand, a beretta. Red in colour, same as the colour of Hell Star Shower Bite. After all it's just a normal looking beretta.
''Ohhh, red, I'm in love with the colour red. As you can see, I love the taste of blood, the smell of it. It chokes up my nostril so hard that I'm addicted into it. Red has always been, my god.''
Right after that Zigedich dashes towards Lylford. He points his gun towards Lylford and shoots out a blast of red reiatsu energy. Lylford djinns and dodges it just in time. Lylford is still struggling to find a room to breath.
''We'll see, whether a gun, or a bow, is faster?'' Smiles Zigedich.
On the other hand, Tetsuo is already fighting with his own Shinigami opponents.
''You know what? I hated guys with a spiky hair, it irritates me,'' Says the Shinigami. His hair is short and straight, but it's blue in colour.
''I hated guys with blue-coloured hair,'' Says Tetsuo while pressing his reattiou harder on the reiattou on his opponent. And then he continues, ''You know why?''
''I don't need to know,'' Answers the Shinigami.
''BECAUSE IT LOOKS SO GAY!'' Shouts Tetsuo as he jumps away from the Shinigami.
''Ouch, that hurts.'' Says the Shinigami sarcastically. ''But you know what? I'm actually really a gay,''
Those words made Tetsuo's hair stand even spikier. He grips on to his reiattou even harder.
''Nah, I'm just kidding. I guess we should just stop this pile of bullshit but instead, carry on the battle,'' Says the Shinigami while not looking at Tetsuo.
''Well, we share the same mind,'' Right after that Tetsuo djinns towards the Shinigami.
While crossing their reiattous, Tetsuo asks, ''Well, Shinigami, what's your name?''
''Huh? Why did you need to know? Answers the Shinigami that doesn't seemed to care much about it.
''No reason,'' Answers Tetsuo while still slashing his reiattou against the Shinigami.
The Shinigami then pushes away Tetsuo with his palm. Tetsuo jumps back and distant himself with the Shinigami.
''Well, my name is Tetsuo Hayama,'' Says Tetsuo.
''Since you told me yours, then...''
Tetsuo is waiting for the answer but the Shinigami seems to hold on to his words.
''Then, I shall not tell you my name,'' Answers the Shinigami thus completing the whole sentence.
That reply makes Tetsuo even angrier. ''What the...!'' Shouts Tetsuo.
''You are breaking the rules of a battle,'' Shouts Tetsuo while pointing his finger at the Shinigami.
''Rules? There is no such thing as rules in a battle,'' Says the Shinigami sarcarstically, and then he continues,
''There is only one rule in a battle... That is to bring down your opponent at all costs,'' Says the Shinigami while grinning.
Tetsuo went back to his serious face in an instant. He then smiles.
''Well then, looks like I will be the one who brings you down first, you bastard Shinigami,'' Says Tetsuo.
''First Tear, Godwrath's Azure.'' Tetsuo's reiattou disappears an ancient egypt symbol of eye appears on his right palm.
''Very interesting, my friend,'' Says the Shinigami.
''I will be the one who brings you DOWN!'' Screams Tetsuo as he blasts off pillars of lightning strikes from his palm towards the Shinigami.
** The end, please stay tuned for the next chapter. **
** I can't see your face, it's not here, nor in the dark. Define your own words, with your own swords. **
Cain is struggling to find his way back to the farm house. He djinns towards the end of the forest. He is blinded by the nervousness and the darkness of his past. A sudden pain strikes across his stomach.
'' Argh, goddamn it,'' Says Cain while pressing his hand on his stomach.
Normally he can get out from this forest just in a blink of a time. But not today, not, today...
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In front of the farm house, the fellowship of the Shinigamis stood still. Each and everyone of them bear the same objective, to destroy Ruri and her comrades and achieve their plan.
''Hoi! Gonzhucha, That spiky hair is mine,'' Says an unknown Shinigami confidently.
''Up to you,'' Replied Gonzhucha, another Shinigami. ''Looks like the short one, is mine,'' He is staring at Colt.
On the other hand, Tetsuo stood along with Colt.
''Hey Tetsuo,'' Calls Colt.
''What?'' Asks Tetsuo without looking at him.
''Are you nervous?''
''All I can say is, nope, I'm not,''
''Very good,'' Says Colt. ''Then they shall all lie underneath my blade!'' Shouts Colt as he rushes towards the Shinigami he is facing with.
Lastly, Ruri is standing alone. While her companions are all facing their opponents. And then, comes another Shinigami, with brown hair in a messy fasion and a dark beard just right underneath his mouth.
''You must be the girl they are all talking about,'' Says the Shinigami while summoning his reiattou.
''Well, thanks. I can't believe that I'm so famous nowadays, everyone is talking about me huh?'' Says Ruri sarcastically.
''Then, I'm glad that because I will be the one to kill you,'' Replied the Shinigami.
'' We'll see then,'' Ruri summons her reiattou and djinns towards the Shinigami.
And so, the battle is on. Five Shinigamis against Ruri, Darucard, Colt, Lylford and Tetsuo.
Lylford is having a hard time against his opponent, Zigedich. Tetsuo is already holding his First Tear, Hell Star Shower Bite.
''Is that all you've got? It pains me to see that you are now suffering,'' Taunts Zigedich, the 7th Division Vice Chieftain.
''It's not over yet!'' Lylford then djinns back and forth thus creating a lot of illusions of his, with lightning speed.
Zigedich is seem shocked by Lylford's surprising attack.
''Which one is the real one? Damn it!'' Thinks Zigedich. He randomly picked a target and rushes towards it.
Zigedich swings his reiattou towards the figure of Lylford but it vanishes. And then behind of him, an arrow shoots out of no where wounded his right hand. Zigedich then jumps back while holding his hand against the wound, it's bleeding.
''Tch! Cheap skills like this can't harm me,'' Says Zigedich with a cocky voice while pointing the reiattou to Lylford, whom is now standing alone.
''You've underestimated me. You see, my First Tear, Hell Star Shower Bite, doesn't just give me long range advantage of attacking, it gives me speed too, and it's hella of speed,'' Says Lylford.
Zigedich didn't say a single word. He grips on his reiattou tighter and tigther. But then, Lylford is right in front his face, with a bow pointing right at him.
''Good bye,'' Says Lylford, with a smile.
That attack creates an explosion, thus creating fumes of smokes. Lylford is standing aside and staring into the pile of gray air. Expecting that he has beaten his opponent.
And then there are choking voices coming out from the smoke. Lylford is shocked to still see his opponent is still standing. And the shadow started to emerge out from the gray air.
This time he is carrying a gun. His outfit has changed. Red coat and a long and tight red pants, but still with that black hair, long on the left side.. He grins. Lylford stares at his ''new'' opponent emotionlessly.
''Well, you think you are the only one that excels in long range attack? You're so wrong,'' Grins Zigedich. Then he continues,
''This is my [First Tear, Right Hand of Epsilon],'' Says Zigedich while holding his First Tear with his right hand, a beretta. Red in colour, same as the colour of Hell Star Shower Bite. After all it's just a normal looking beretta.
''Ohhh, red, I'm in love with the colour red. As you can see, I love the taste of blood, the smell of it. It chokes up my nostril so hard that I'm addicted into it. Red has always been, my god.''
Right after that Zigedich dashes towards Lylford. He points his gun towards Lylford and shoots out a blast of red reiatsu energy. Lylford djinns and dodges it just in time. Lylford is still struggling to find a room to breath.
''We'll see, whether a gun, or a bow, is faster?'' Smiles Zigedich.
On the other hand, Tetsuo is already fighting with his own Shinigami opponents.
''You know what? I hated guys with a spiky hair, it irritates me,'' Says the Shinigami. His hair is short and straight, but it's blue in colour.
''I hated guys with blue-coloured hair,'' Says Tetsuo while pressing his reattiou harder on the reiattou on his opponent. And then he continues, ''You know why?''
''I don't need to know,'' Answers the Shinigami.
''BECAUSE IT LOOKS SO GAY!'' Shouts Tetsuo as he jumps away from the Shinigami.
''Ouch, that hurts.'' Says the Shinigami sarcastically. ''But you know what? I'm actually really a gay,''
Those words made Tetsuo's hair stand even spikier. He grips on to his reiattou even harder.
''Nah, I'm just kidding. I guess we should just stop this pile of bullshit but instead, carry on the battle,'' Says the Shinigami while not looking at Tetsuo.
''Well, we share the same mind,'' Right after that Tetsuo djinns towards the Shinigami.
While crossing their reiattous, Tetsuo asks, ''Well, Shinigami, what's your name?''
''Huh? Why did you need to know? Answers the Shinigami that doesn't seemed to care much about it.
''No reason,'' Answers Tetsuo while still slashing his reiattou against the Shinigami.
The Shinigami then pushes away Tetsuo with his palm. Tetsuo jumps back and distant himself with the Shinigami.
''Well, my name is Tetsuo Hayama,'' Says Tetsuo.
''Since you told me yours, then...''
Tetsuo is waiting for the answer but the Shinigami seems to hold on to his words.
''Then, I shall not tell you my name,'' Answers the Shinigami thus completing the whole sentence.
That reply makes Tetsuo even angrier. ''What the...!'' Shouts Tetsuo.
''You are breaking the rules of a battle,'' Shouts Tetsuo while pointing his finger at the Shinigami.
''Rules? There is no such thing as rules in a battle,'' Says the Shinigami sarcarstically, and then he continues,
''There is only one rule in a battle... That is to bring down your opponent at all costs,'' Says the Shinigami while grinning.
Tetsuo went back to his serious face in an instant. He then smiles.
''Well then, looks like I will be the one who brings you down first, you bastard Shinigami,'' Says Tetsuo.
''First Tear, Godwrath's Azure.'' Tetsuo's reiattou disappears an ancient egypt symbol of eye appears on his right palm.
''Very interesting, my friend,'' Says the Shinigami.
''I will be the one who brings you DOWN!'' Screams Tetsuo as he blasts off pillars of lightning strikes from his palm towards the Shinigami.
** The end, please stay tuned for the next chapter. **
Saturday, September 4, 2010
Chapter 11: Blooming Under Your Blade
** One step closer to the truth. **
The Valrog: You're mine...
As the blade is almost right in front of Cain's forehead, Cain jumps away. That attack wounded Cain's right cheek as he is dodging it. Cain's cheek is shown by dripping of blood.
The Valrog: Perhaps you're not so strong after all.
Cain: ...
The Valrog: I shall end this right now.
The Valrog charges towards Cain without any hesitation. Cain remained still on where he is standing. He closes up his both of his eyes.
The Valrog: This time, you are truly mine!
Cain: Kidou of Trapping, Triple Sunlight Beams.
By the time, 3 thin and white beams slam into The Valrog's body. Trapping and making him unable to move at all. He struggles to breach out from this kidou trap.
Cain: Underestimating your opponent is what defeats you this time. Kidou of Destruction, Violet Flames.
Cain fires a blast of purple reiatsu energy towards the trapped Valrog. The blast slams into Valrog. Then The Valrog is engulf in flames.
The Valrog: Nooooooooooo!!!
He slowly disappears and nothing is left after he died.
Cain: The 10 Divisions....
Cain then djinns away from the garden.
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Back to the farm house.
Ruri gasps: Uhhh.... I surrender...
Darucard: That's fast, I wasn't even putting my full power on it.
Ruri: Don't get cocky.
Darucard: Ha, just kidding. Anyway, get some rest. There are still lots of things that we need to work on.
Colt: Hey, did u two sense something?
Tetsuo: What is it?
Lylford: Hmmm...
Colt: I don't know, but, my senses tell me that something wrong is coming our way.
Tetsuo: Huh? Come on, don't be so sensitive... We are good now, aren't we?
Lylford: ...
Colt: Guess I'm just mistaken.
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Inside an unknown space. The surrounding is a stacked-up of numerous bizzare colours and shapes.
Strangers are seen walking inside it, Shinigamis to be more precise.
Shinigami 1: Almost there, people.
Shinigami 2: I think we are greatly outnumber, we will just finish them right away.
Other Shinigamis grin. There are up to 10 Shinigamis in this group. And they are actually walking inside a Fuera, going towards their destination... The farm house.
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Inside the farmhouse's dining room.
Ruri: Darucard, where is Cain?
Darucard: No idea. He always went out without informing us.
Tetsuo: He is a real weirdo...
Ruri: But, aren't he a former Shinigami?
Lylford: Huh!? How did you know about this?
Darucard: I told her...
Tetsuo: But the last time you...
Darucard interupts: I figure out that it's a right thing to tell her, since she is now our comrade also.
Ruri remains silence. Until this very moment, she didn't even talk to Cain before, not even a single word. She starts to wonder. By then...
** GROOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMM!!!!! **
A huge mass of reiatsu is surrounding the whole area. This is by far one of the largest reiatsu that Ruri had ever face before.
Ruri: What is that thing!!!???
Darucard: Colt, quickly! Outside!
Colt, Lylford and Tetsuo dash outside the farm house to take a look at what's going on.
Tetsuo: Look! The sky!
Lylford: Fuera again.
The sky tears up again, this time. It's an abnormal tear. It's scale is larger than ever, and wicked amount of reiatsu is coming right out from the Fuera's entrance.
Then Darucard and Ruri comes out from the house too. They are all shocked by the unbelievable sight.
Darucard: This is not good.
Ruri: Not again...
And then, right at that moment. 10 Shinigamis walk out from the Fuera. All bearing the same objective, to finish off the whole group.
Shinigami 1: Look what we've got here...
Shinigami 2: That spiky hair guy is mine.
Shinigami 3: Don't be so hasty. Time is what we all have.
Other Shinigamis remained silence, with that serious look on each of their face.
Ruri: It's Lute!
Lute is standing on the sky too, along with her Vice Chieftain, Jyuro.
Jyuro: Look, Chieftain! It's Ruri...
Lute: Stop talking.
Shinigami 4: Now, what should we do? Get the battle started or...
Shinigami 2: Just kill them!
Right by that moment, five Shinigamis charges towards the 5 of them.
On the sky, the other five Shinigamis remain there and watches.
Shinigami 6: What do we do now?
Shinigami 7: Just wait...
Shinigami 8: Such a nice idea...
Lute: Tch!
The Shinigami that is standing in front of Darucard is bearing a hair of yellow along with yellow eyebrows. There are dozens of earrings pierced on both of his ears. And with his sharp eyes. Staring straight across Darucard.
The Shinigami: Hey there...
Darucard: So, I guess we have to fight right now huh?
The Shinigami: Well, not much we can do about it aren't we? What's your name.
Darucard: I don't find any reason that I need to tell you my name.
The Shinigami: Oh. That's sad. You know why?
Darucard: I don't need to know.
The Shinigami: Hahahaha... I'm so going to kill you, right now!
And the Shinigami that is standing against Lylford. With messy black hair and long on the left side. But clean and shortcut on the right. Small eyes and a small nose. Wearing his Shinigami uniform.
The Shinigami: Hey you...
Lylford: Huh?
The Shinigami: You look strong, are you strong?
Lylford: Well... It depends...
The Shinigami: Well then, I shall tell you my name. My name is Zigedich Gesell. The Vice Chieftain of 7th Division.
Lylford: I'm Lylford Granz.
The Shinigami: Thanks for telling me your name, it's essential because everytime I killed an opponent, I write down their names.
Lylford: Tch...
** That's all for this chaper. Stay tuned for the next chapter to find out more about this crucial battle. **
The Valrog: You're mine...
As the blade is almost right in front of Cain's forehead, Cain jumps away. That attack wounded Cain's right cheek as he is dodging it. Cain's cheek is shown by dripping of blood.
The Valrog: Perhaps you're not so strong after all.
Cain: ...
The Valrog: I shall end this right now.
The Valrog charges towards Cain without any hesitation. Cain remained still on where he is standing. He closes up his both of his eyes.
The Valrog: This time, you are truly mine!
Cain: Kidou of Trapping, Triple Sunlight Beams.
By the time, 3 thin and white beams slam into The Valrog's body. Trapping and making him unable to move at all. He struggles to breach out from this kidou trap.
Cain: Underestimating your opponent is what defeats you this time. Kidou of Destruction, Violet Flames.
Cain fires a blast of purple reiatsu energy towards the trapped Valrog. The blast slams into Valrog. Then The Valrog is engulf in flames.
The Valrog: Nooooooooooo!!!
He slowly disappears and nothing is left after he died.
Cain: The 10 Divisions....
Cain then djinns away from the garden.
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Back to the farm house.
Ruri gasps: Uhhh.... I surrender...
Darucard: That's fast, I wasn't even putting my full power on it.
Ruri: Don't get cocky.
Darucard: Ha, just kidding. Anyway, get some rest. There are still lots of things that we need to work on.
Colt: Hey, did u two sense something?
Tetsuo: What is it?
Lylford: Hmmm...
Colt: I don't know, but, my senses tell me that something wrong is coming our way.
Tetsuo: Huh? Come on, don't be so sensitive... We are good now, aren't we?
Lylford: ...
Colt: Guess I'm just mistaken.
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Inside an unknown space. The surrounding is a stacked-up of numerous bizzare colours and shapes.
Strangers are seen walking inside it, Shinigamis to be more precise.
Shinigami 1: Almost there, people.
Shinigami 2: I think we are greatly outnumber, we will just finish them right away.
Other Shinigamis grin. There are up to 10 Shinigamis in this group. And they are actually walking inside a Fuera, going towards their destination... The farm house.
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Inside the farmhouse's dining room.
Ruri: Darucard, where is Cain?
Darucard: No idea. He always went out without informing us.
Tetsuo: He is a real weirdo...
Ruri: But, aren't he a former Shinigami?
Lylford: Huh!? How did you know about this?
Darucard: I told her...
Tetsuo: But the last time you...
Darucard interupts: I figure out that it's a right thing to tell her, since she is now our comrade also.
Ruri remains silence. Until this very moment, she didn't even talk to Cain before, not even a single word. She starts to wonder. By then...
** GROOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMM!!!!! **
A huge mass of reiatsu is surrounding the whole area. This is by far one of the largest reiatsu that Ruri had ever face before.
Ruri: What is that thing!!!???
Darucard: Colt, quickly! Outside!
Colt, Lylford and Tetsuo dash outside the farm house to take a look at what's going on.
Tetsuo: Look! The sky!
Lylford: Fuera again.
The sky tears up again, this time. It's an abnormal tear. It's scale is larger than ever, and wicked amount of reiatsu is coming right out from the Fuera's entrance.
Then Darucard and Ruri comes out from the house too. They are all shocked by the unbelievable sight.
Darucard: This is not good.
Ruri: Not again...
And then, right at that moment. 10 Shinigamis walk out from the Fuera. All bearing the same objective, to finish off the whole group.
Shinigami 1: Look what we've got here...
Shinigami 2: That spiky hair guy is mine.
Shinigami 3: Don't be so hasty. Time is what we all have.
Other Shinigamis remained silence, with that serious look on each of their face.
Ruri: It's Lute!
Lute is standing on the sky too, along with her Vice Chieftain, Jyuro.
Jyuro: Look, Chieftain! It's Ruri...
Lute: Stop talking.
Shinigami 4: Now, what should we do? Get the battle started or...
Shinigami 2: Just kill them!
Right by that moment, five Shinigamis charges towards the 5 of them.
On the sky, the other five Shinigamis remain there and watches.
Shinigami 6: What do we do now?
Shinigami 7: Just wait...
Shinigami 8: Such a nice idea...
Lute: Tch!
The Shinigami that is standing in front of Darucard is bearing a hair of yellow along with yellow eyebrows. There are dozens of earrings pierced on both of his ears. And with his sharp eyes. Staring straight across Darucard.
The Shinigami: Hey there...
Darucard: So, I guess we have to fight right now huh?
The Shinigami: Well, not much we can do about it aren't we? What's your name.
Darucard: I don't find any reason that I need to tell you my name.
The Shinigami: Oh. That's sad. You know why?
Darucard: I don't need to know.
The Shinigami: Hahahaha... I'm so going to kill you, right now!
And the Shinigami that is standing against Lylford. With messy black hair and long on the left side. But clean and shortcut on the right. Small eyes and a small nose. Wearing his Shinigami uniform.
The Shinigami: Hey you...
Lylford: Huh?
The Shinigami: You look strong, are you strong?
Lylford: Well... It depends...
The Shinigami: Well then, I shall tell you my name. My name is Zigedich Gesell. The Vice Chieftain of 7th Division.
Lylford: I'm Lylford Granz.
The Shinigami: Thanks for telling me your name, it's essential because everytime I killed an opponent, I write down their names.
Lylford: Tch...
** That's all for this chaper. Stay tuned for the next chapter to find out more about this crucial battle. **
Wednesday, September 1, 2010
Chapter 10: The Road Of Contradiction And Pride
** Denial by pride, contradiction by power. ''
Round moon hanging on top of the dark sky. Unknown number of figures can be seen, in front of the main gate of the unknown fortress.
Stranger 1: People, this is it.
All the other strangers grin. They knew this is the time, they are on to something, evil.
Stranger 2: Lord had given us an order, and now, we execute it.
Stranger 3: The girl...
Stranger 4: And Cain...
One of the stranger pushes open the gate just by using his fingertip. Facing them is a vast land of desert. Desert of night seems lonely. All they can see is piles and piles of sand buried underneath their cold feet.
Stranger 5: Let's get going. Gentlemen, and, lady.
Lute Thelpardian, the Chieftain of 9th Division is there too. She has an emotionless face. Jyuro is just standing behind her.
Jyuro: Master, ain't we going to use Fuera?
Lute: Just follow their lead.
Jyuro: .....
The fellowship took off their journey. Danger lies within, but do Ruri and her comrades know what is coming their way?
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The next morning, at the farm house.
One reiattou swings against another reiattou. Blocking each other as well. It's actually Darucard and Ruri undergoing their training.
Darucard while attacking Ruri: Not fast enough, girl!
And then Ruri djinns behind Darucard and that swing of her reiattou almost got Darucard's backhead but Darucard blocks it just on time by lifting his reiattou to his back.
Darucard: Still slow...
Ruri: Grrrrr!!! Stop provoking me!!!
Right in front of the farm house sits Tetsuo, Colt and Lylford. They are watching the battle.
Colt: She's really putting all her efforts into this.
Lylford: Yeah.
Tetsuo: Where's Cain by the way?
Colt: Don't know.
Lylford: He's still a strange guy. Always off to somewhere else without informing us.
Colt: Let it be.
Then a hard swing of Darucard's reiattou cuts away Ruri's reiattou. Her reiattou flies up to the air and then drop to the ground afterwards.
Ruri: What!?
Darucard: You need more practice, girl.
Ruri: Hmph! Again!
Darucard: As you wish.
Ruri picks up her reiattou and rushes towards Darucard.
Ruri: Rahhhh!!!!
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Meanwhile, once again in the Royal Seireitei Palace. Cain is searching for something inside.
Cain: It must be somewhere in this place.
Cain is staring into a limestone wall. It must be made around 100 years ago. He then touches his hand across the wall. Seemingly trying to look for something on the wall. After all it's just a plain and hard limestone wall with nothing on it.
Cain: Hmmm, guess I'm mistaken.
Suddenly there are sounds coming back from behind Cain, rolling of small stones. Looks like someone just walked by the area. Cain immediately raise up his awareness.
A figure is lurking behind Cain. He is observing the movements of Cain as he still trying to figure out something on the limestone wall. Suddenly the figure rushes towards Cain.
Cain instinctly swings turns around while swinging his fist. That punch is block off by a blade. Cain is shocked at what that is standing in front of him.
Cain: A Valrog!?
The stranger is wearing a hood. His face can't be seen as the darkness inside the hood blocks off his face. Holding a blade, not a reiattou. That stranger started attacking Cain.
Cain quickly djinns away from the hallway. The stranger quickly follows behind Cain.
Cain turns around: Kidou of Trapping, Five Star Spin Web.
A crystal web quickly entangles around the walls and floors of the hallway. As the stranger is about to crush into it, he djinns and dodges the web.
Cain: Crap!
The stranger continues his pursuit against Cain in full speed. As Cain finally reaches to the main garden of the palace, the stranger djinns in front of Cain and poiting his blade towards Cain. The tip of the blade stands just right in front of Cain's throat.
The stranger: Surrender.
Cain: No, I won't. You're a Valrog.
The stranger (Valrog): Yes... Follow me and your life will be spare.
Cain: So the Shinigamis had finally succeeded their first plan. Screw you and I won't follow you anyway.
The Valrog: Okay then.
The Valrog started transforming. Something is changing in his body. Unknow fumes and vapours are surrounding him suddenly. Despite his face can't be seen, but his eyes is glowing in red.
Cain: Crap, he is releasing.
The Valrog then screams. And there he is, standing holding his blade. But instead, there are flames surrounding him. And that pair of bloodshoot glowing red eyes.
Cain immediately djinns to the back of the Valrog.
Cain: Kidou of Destruction, Shaking Thunder Cannon.
Cain fires a electrical blast of reiatsu energy towards the Valrog with his barehand. It hits the back of Valrog but the Valrog seems unharmed at all.
The Valrog then swings his blade towards Cain in unbelievable strength. Cain finally summons his reiattou and blocks it off just on time.
The Valrog: You deny your own existence as a Shinigami, you swallow your own pride. And you joined the wrong forces. You're all wrong.
Then the Valrog swings his blade again, this time when it is about to hit Cain's head and Cain is ready to block it. The Valrog suddenly djinns away.
Cain: Huh?!
This time the Valrog is behind Cain. With the fingertip of his blade almost near the forehead of Cain.
The Valrog: You're mine...
** Stay tuned for next chapter. **
Round moon hanging on top of the dark sky. Unknown number of figures can be seen, in front of the main gate of the unknown fortress.
Stranger 1: People, this is it.
All the other strangers grin. They knew this is the time, they are on to something, evil.
Stranger 2: Lord had given us an order, and now, we execute it.
Stranger 3: The girl...
Stranger 4: And Cain...
One of the stranger pushes open the gate just by using his fingertip. Facing them is a vast land of desert. Desert of night seems lonely. All they can see is piles and piles of sand buried underneath their cold feet.
Stranger 5: Let's get going. Gentlemen, and, lady.
Lute Thelpardian, the Chieftain of 9th Division is there too. She has an emotionless face. Jyuro is just standing behind her.
Jyuro: Master, ain't we going to use Fuera?
Lute: Just follow their lead.
Jyuro: .....
The fellowship took off their journey. Danger lies within, but do Ruri and her comrades know what is coming their way?
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The next morning, at the farm house.
One reiattou swings against another reiattou. Blocking each other as well. It's actually Darucard and Ruri undergoing their training.
Darucard while attacking Ruri: Not fast enough, girl!
And then Ruri djinns behind Darucard and that swing of her reiattou almost got Darucard's backhead but Darucard blocks it just on time by lifting his reiattou to his back.
Darucard: Still slow...
Ruri: Grrrrr!!! Stop provoking me!!!
Right in front of the farm house sits Tetsuo, Colt and Lylford. They are watching the battle.
Colt: She's really putting all her efforts into this.
Lylford: Yeah.
Tetsuo: Where's Cain by the way?
Colt: Don't know.
Lylford: He's still a strange guy. Always off to somewhere else without informing us.
Colt: Let it be.
Then a hard swing of Darucard's reiattou cuts away Ruri's reiattou. Her reiattou flies up to the air and then drop to the ground afterwards.
Ruri: What!?
Darucard: You need more practice, girl.
Ruri: Hmph! Again!
Darucard: As you wish.
Ruri picks up her reiattou and rushes towards Darucard.
Ruri: Rahhhh!!!!
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Meanwhile, once again in the Royal Seireitei Palace. Cain is searching for something inside.
Cain: It must be somewhere in this place.
Cain is staring into a limestone wall. It must be made around 100 years ago. He then touches his hand across the wall. Seemingly trying to look for something on the wall. After all it's just a plain and hard limestone wall with nothing on it.
Cain: Hmmm, guess I'm mistaken.
Suddenly there are sounds coming back from behind Cain, rolling of small stones. Looks like someone just walked by the area. Cain immediately raise up his awareness.
A figure is lurking behind Cain. He is observing the movements of Cain as he still trying to figure out something on the limestone wall. Suddenly the figure rushes towards Cain.
Cain instinctly swings turns around while swinging his fist. That punch is block off by a blade. Cain is shocked at what that is standing in front of him.
Cain: A Valrog!?
The stranger is wearing a hood. His face can't be seen as the darkness inside the hood blocks off his face. Holding a blade, not a reiattou. That stranger started attacking Cain.
Cain quickly djinns away from the hallway. The stranger quickly follows behind Cain.
Cain turns around: Kidou of Trapping, Five Star Spin Web.
A crystal web quickly entangles around the walls and floors of the hallway. As the stranger is about to crush into it, he djinns and dodges the web.
Cain: Crap!
The stranger continues his pursuit against Cain in full speed. As Cain finally reaches to the main garden of the palace, the stranger djinns in front of Cain and poiting his blade towards Cain. The tip of the blade stands just right in front of Cain's throat.
The stranger: Surrender.
Cain: No, I won't. You're a Valrog.
The stranger (Valrog): Yes... Follow me and your life will be spare.
Cain: So the Shinigamis had finally succeeded their first plan. Screw you and I won't follow you anyway.
The Valrog: Okay then.
The Valrog started transforming. Something is changing in his body. Unknow fumes and vapours are surrounding him suddenly. Despite his face can't be seen, but his eyes is glowing in red.
Cain: Crap, he is releasing.
The Valrog then screams. And there he is, standing holding his blade. But instead, there are flames surrounding him. And that pair of bloodshoot glowing red eyes.
Cain immediately djinns to the back of the Valrog.
Cain: Kidou of Destruction, Shaking Thunder Cannon.
Cain fires a electrical blast of reiatsu energy towards the Valrog with his barehand. It hits the back of Valrog but the Valrog seems unharmed at all.
The Valrog then swings his blade towards Cain in unbelievable strength. Cain finally summons his reiattou and blocks it off just on time.
The Valrog: You deny your own existence as a Shinigami, you swallow your own pride. And you joined the wrong forces. You're all wrong.
Then the Valrog swings his blade again, this time when it is about to hit Cain's head and Cain is ready to block it. The Valrog suddenly djinns away.
Cain: Huh?!
This time the Valrog is behind Cain. With the fingertip of his blade almost near the forehead of Cain.
The Valrog: You're mine...
** Stay tuned for next chapter. **
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