Monday, August 30, 2010

Chapter 9: Back To Reality

** Down right to the earth, they are on to something. **


Back at the farm house. Tetsuo and Lylford are still resting inside their room. Right then Cain kicks open the door with the faintedColt in his arm.

Tetsuo: Hey! The door!

Lylford: Colt!

Cain: He will be alright. And also the both of you, how was it?

Tetsuo: Well.. I guess, we beaten that Vice Chieftain?

Cain: Stay still. Kidou of Healing, Regenerate!

Glowing shield made out of reiatsu appears and surrounding the room. The wounds and injuries of Tetsuo, Lylford and Colt are slowly recovering.

Lylford: It amazes me everytime you use that, Cain.

Cain remained silence still. He's been using this healing kidou for a long time. Everytime his comrades are injured in a battle, he is there to lend a helping hand.

Cain: 3 of you. Stay in this room and don't move. Take good care of Colt. He's still paralyzed from that palm push by the Shinigami Chieftain. I'm going out for a walk...

Then Cain walks out and closes the door. Tetsuo and Lylford slowly close their eyes up and prepare to take a good rest.

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Darucard and Ruri are seen sitting beside the town's flea market. Ruri is holding a glass of water.

Darucard: How's things going, young girl...

Ruri: Half past dead, perhaps...

Darucard: Ya, I know it's tough for you. But hold on...

Ruri then takes a sip of water out of her glass. And she continues,

Ruri: Who is Cain?

Darucard's face is a mix of surprise and concern.

Darucard: What do you mean by ''who is Cain''?

Ruri: He's different... I mean, he breaks open the negation box with just a single strike. He's not human right?

Darucard: ....

Ruri: Just tell me!

Darucard: He's a former Shinigami.

That word stung Ruri's heart. She felt cold and shocked. But why? She isn't afraid of this but... She just can't explain this weird feeling.

Darucard: Don't worry, he's good.

Ruri: What do you mean by former?

Darucard: Well, long story...

Ruri puts down her glass of water on the muddy ground.

Ruri: Well then... Let's head back home.

Darucard: Huh?

Ruri: Don't worry Darucard. I'm alright.

Darucard smiles: Good to hear that...

The both of them is seen heading back to the farm house by walking through the market and disappeared into the crowds.

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In a huge hall. An unconfirmed amount of strangers are gathering inside. All of them are wearing the same uniforms. They are all, Shinigamis.

Stranger 1: What do you mean, Lute?

Lute: It's Cain...

Stranger 2: Cain! No way he can survive!

Stranger 3: Yeah. Don't make up your own lies, bitch.

Lute: Dare you say that again!!!???

Jyuro: Hey Illruga, watch your mouth.

And then a familiar face and voice speaks. It's the chieftain of 5th Division from that night.

5th Division Chieftain: Cain? You mean you saw him? Stop joking around, girl.

Lute: I didn't!

Sucsamad: Oh yeah, prove it...

Zephyrus: Cain is long gone... And the same to his so-called comrades...

Gon Jinn: Yeah!

Guisarme: ......

Other strangers remained silence. Maybe they tend to stay out of this mess. And then a voice speaks out. It's coming from the guy sitting in the middle of the hall. But his face is blocked by the dim lighting.

The voice: Silence! Lute Thelpardian, you sure you've seen Cain?

Lute: Yes, lord. He breaks through my negation box in just one strike.

The voice: Well then, I believe in you. When Cain is still alive, that means our plan cannot work out.

All the Shinigamis in the room are in shock. They are all in disblief upon hearing those words coming out from lips of their Lord.

Stranger 1: What!? Are you kidding me?

The voice: Silence. Now my fellow Chieftains and Vice Chieftains. We have a deprived Shinigami on loose. So, in order to take down this rat. I need all of you to buckle up.

5th Division Chieftain: Tch!

Lute: Thank you, lord.

Stranger 4: So now what? Attack them?

The voice: No....

Stranger 3: Huh?

The voice: Kill them. And make our plan work.

All the Shinigamis in the room are in excitement for a moment. They knew that they can finally be in battle. And they are all really keen in destroying their enemies.

The voice: The meeting is now dismissed.


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Back in the headquarter of 5th Division.

Guisarme: Master, what should we do now? All of them knew Cain is alive.

Chieftain: We'll just stay...

Sucsamad: What?!

Gon Jinn: I think we should move out now.

Zephyrus: Yeah...

Chieftain: No... We'll wait.

Sucsamad: But that goddamn ''headmaster'' had already put out an order. He wants all of us to move out soon.

Chieftain: You wanna follow his orders or mine?

Sucsamad: Sorry master...

The Chieftain then stands up from his chair. He then lift his hand towards the door. The door opens automatically and the Chieftain walks out from the room.

The 4 Lieutenants remained silence.


** Friends or Betrayal? Stay tuned for next chapter. **

Sunday, August 29, 2010

Chapter 8: Wasted But Wanted

For readers: Currently I'm writing this fiction story more frequently. So will be posting few chapters for this week. Hope you guys enjoy :D


** God created violence. And humanity abused it. **


As Ruri djinns away. 2 of the shinigamis didn't move a single inch. They just stared at Lylford and Tetsuo whom are standing on the ground, holding their reiattous.

Male Shinigami: That girl ran away...

Female Shinigami: ....

Male Shinigami: Master, what should we do? Pursuit her?

Female Shinigami: No. Finish these two pricks on the ground.

Male Shinigami showing an evil smile on his face: I would love to...

Tetsuo: That reiatsu coming out from the woman. She's a...

Lylford: Chieftain.

A huge jolt of chill went through all their spines. They are facing a Shinigami Chieftain. Although they know it's an uphill battle for them, but they will never give up.

Tetsuo: Granz, ya know what?

Lylford: Don't call my last name. And what?

Tetsuo: I would still love to drink some beer with ya you know? Perhaps...

Lylford interupts: Don't get all mush up pal. We won't lose.

Suddenly, the male shinigami djinns towards them with holding a reiattou. He started slashing and swinging his reiattou towards both of them. As the both of them keeps block off his attacks.

Male Shinigami: Ha! Is that all you've got? I'm so disapointed on both of you. Looks like I'm going to finish this in an instant.

Lylford: Not so fast! First Tear, Hell Star Shower Bite!

Lylford then djinns away from him and started shooting arrows towards him. As Tetsuo dodges all the arrows too.

Tetsuo: ARE YA CRAZY! YOU'RE GONNA GET ME KILL! THANK GOD I'M FAST ENOUGH TO DODGE ALL OF YA GODDAMN ARROWS!

Lylford: Behind!

The Male Shinigami almost cut through the body of Tetsuo from behind. But Tetsuo seemed to dodged it just on time.

Male Shinigami: Did I miss it? Not so fast of you huh...

Tetsuo: No you didn't miss it... You cut me a bit right on my stomach...

Tetsuo is seen bleeding. He holds his palm against the wound and then he charges towards the Shinigami.

Lylford: Tetsuo! Don't rush yourself!

Tetsuo: AHHHH! [First Tear, Godwrath's Azure]

Male Shinigami: Huh!?

Tetsuo blasted out tons of lightning strikes from his palm. All the lightning strikes almost got the Male Shinigami electrified. As the male shinigami djinns away from Tetsuo.

Male Shinigami: Your First Tear... Is not in melee form.

Tetsuo: Well, the game has just begun.

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Ruri is seen djinns towards no where. She don't know where Darucard is. She wants to help Lylford and Tetsuo but she was rejected. She is... Scared...

Suddenly out of no where, a blast of fireball almost caught her. But Ruri just dodges it right on time.

Ruri: Who is there?!

A female voice: Look at you. How nervous are you... Don't be scare, lil girl. We still have a lot of time... To play!

Ruri: Come out!

The Female Shinigami from just now showed up from the bush. Although she is wearing an eyepatch on her left eye, but Ruri still can feel the cold stare of the Shinigami right from both of her eyes.

Female Shinigami: You must be the girl that all of my comrades had been talking about. Am I right, Ruri Michalka?

Ruri again felt fear running through her veins. Although she just beaten Lylford and Tetsuo days ago. But this time she can't hold on to herself, but to fear.

Female Shinigami: Good news for you, I wont kill you. But bad news, I'm taking you away from here. Follow my orders or else you will be suffering.

Ruri: NO WAY I'M GONNA FOLLOW YOU!

Ruri then djinns towards the Female Shinigami with her reiattou. As her reiattou almost cut through the Shinigami's head. She is blocked. By the bare-hands of the Female Shinigami.

Ruri: What?!

Female Shinigami: Kidou of Trapping, strangle her.

A negation box appears and trapped Ruri inside of it. She can't seem to escape it.

Female Shinigami: You're too naive, lil girl. Laying your hands on a Chieftain.

Ruri: A chieftain....?

Female Shinigami: Well, no harm telling you. My name is Lute Thelpardian. Chieftain of the 9th Division. And welcome to my world, Ruri Michalka.

Ruri is shocked upon hearing that. In just about a week. The Shinigamis are already after her. What can she actually do about all this? Just when Ruri is in her nervous breakdown inside the box.
They appeared.

Darucard, Cain and Colt appeared. Cain immediately breaks the negation box off with his kidou strike. Colt instantly charges towards the Female Shinigami with his reiattou. And then Darucard carry Ruri and djinns away from the scene.

Lute: Goddamn it!

Lute pushes Colt away with just her palm, sending Colt flying towards a tree nearby and slamming onto it.

Lute: That's gonna hurt.

Just when Lute is about to leave and run away. She looks up and saw Cain staring at her.

Lute: Cain. Good to see you again.

Cain: Lute...

Lute: Farewell, my ''friend''.

Lute then djinns away and disappeared out of sight. Cain quickly go and checks on Colt who is lying dizzily under the tree.

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Lylford: Meteor Shower of Death!

The Male Shinigami djinns and dodges all the arrows blasting out from Lylford's bow.

Tetsuo: Lylford, out of the way!

Again lightning strikes emerge out from Tetsuo's palm and directed towards the Male Shinigami. As Lylford dodges away right on time, one the lightning successfully wounded the Male Shingami's left foot.

Male Shinigami: Arghh! Goddamn it!

Tetsuo: Hey bastard. Take that!

Male Shinigami: Don't get too cocky.

Lylford: This time will be your foot, but the next time, it's gonna aim directly on your head. Well, who ask your mother borned you with a big head? Easier for targetting...

Male Shinigami: Grrr... FUCK YOU!

Suddenly, Lute appears out of no where.

Lute: Jyuro, leave now!

Male Shinigami (Jyuro): Wait master, but...

Lute: Just go. We're going back.

Lylford: HEY SHINIGAMIS!

Lute then look back to Lylford and Tetsuo.

Lute: Don't worry. You guys will get your asses kick, very soon.

Jyuro: Hahaha. Okay master.

Lute then summons a Fuera on the sky. The sky tears up and a black hole appears. Then the both of them went in and disappeared out of sight as the Fuera closed up.

Lylford: ....

Tetsuo: Thank god. Pal, we've doned it!

Lylford: Yeah.. But the real battle, has just begun...


** Stay tuned for next chapter, will be out in just a few days. **

Friday, August 27, 2010

Chapter 7: Headhittin'

**If he were to sink his teeth into your eye, right now, could you stop him before he blinded you?**


Nightfall, howling of wolves can be heard in distant. Right there, stood the majestic abadoned Royal Seireitei Palace. It's a palace that was used before the Ansung War. But the government torned it down after Shinigami Clan won the battle.

Right now it's a dead place as trespassers are forbidden.
Voices can be heard coming from inside the main entrance. Inside a big hall, the hallway is indeed dark and lights can be seen from one of the room in the end of the hallway.

There are few guys standing inside the room. Strange faces, but all of them share one similarity, evil.

Stranger #1: Ahh... She had finally learnt her very own First Tear.

Stranger #2: Excuse me, but, why are we helding a meeting in such place? This place creeps me out...

Stranger #3: Shut up, Gon Jinn. We still have a lot of works to do.

Stranger #2 (Gon Jinn): Hey.. Don't be so rude...

Stranger #4: Look... I found something...

Stranger #1: What is it?

Stranger #4: It's a nickel. Whoaa... I'm so lucky today!

Stranger #3 punches #4's head: Be serious. Dont forget, we came here to wait for them. I know they will show up soon.

Gon Jinn: Yeah yeah, it's always you know you know...

And then footsteps can be heard tapping on the long and dark hallway. The gloomy setting makes the atmosphere even more creepy. Three shadows can be seen from the hallway. The 4 strangers in the room sit still inside the room, without making a single noise.

The 3 guys in the hallway are Darucard, Colt and Cain.

Darucard: Cain, she've doned it.

Colt: Yeah, I think this is the right time now.

Cain: You sure she is ready?

Darucard: Yeah....

Cain: Look, I don't wanna risk. This is not going to be some fantasy story of a hero saving the entire kingdom and become the ruler and live happily ever after... This is going to be catastrophic...

Colt: ... You are making me asleep....

Darucard: You're not going to risk, Cain, not going to...

Cain: It's just that, I fear that place now.

And then Darucard and Colt went silence for a moment. And Cain speaks again.

Cain: That place... Might drag me back to...

Darucard interupts: Enough said Cain, let's head to the balcony and enjoy the moonlight okay?

Colt: Awww... Everytime we came to this creepy place just to see the goddamn moonlight, and you know what? It's just the 3 of us, no ladies. Are we gay?

Gon Jinn in the room: Hey, that short guy shares the same opinion with me too, we can be friends.

Stranger #3 punches Gon Jinn on the head and say: Shut up will ya.

Stranger #4: Stop punching people, Guisarme!

Stranger #3 (Guisarme): Shut up...

As the 3 of them walks off towards the balcony. The 4 strangers left the place.

Guisarme: Is the place Cain talking about by any chances he is saying our place?

Stranger #1: I guess so. That bastard... I still have unfinished business with him...

Gon Jinn: Zephyrus. We all know that, stop mentioning that all the time.

Stranger #1 (Zephyrus): Hey Guisarme. Where is Sucsamad?

Guisarme: Right behind us, I think he is still checking that nickel. I wonder what's so special about that. He always like weird things...

Stranger #4 (Sucsamad): I can hear you, Guisarme.

Zephyrus: Okay guys. Enough, we gotta head back home to report this to master.

Gon Jinn: Finally, someone said something that's really useful.

Sucsamad: Master is going to like this...

Guisarme then showing an evil smile on his face.

The 4 of them laugh off and djinns away.

And now inside an unknown but massive fortress. Stood a humongous palace. It's size can be compare up to 10 football fields. And a magical force seems to be blinding this fortress from the outside world. It can't be seen from the outside. It's invisible.

Guisarme: Master, here's the report. A guy wearing a hat in a special clothing take the report away from Guisarme.

Gon Jinn, Sucsamad and Zephyrus went and sit on the sofa nearby.

Stranger: So, they are on it yeah?

Guisarme: Yes, master.

Stranger: Any suggestions what should we do? Wanna voice it to our lord?

Guisarme smirks: I guess....

Sucsamad interupts: NO!

Stranger: 4 of you are right, my loyal lieutenants. All of them, are OURS.

Zephyrus smiles evilly: What should we do now? Wait for them to come? Or...

Stranger: Nah... Let's just see how things will be. We'll wait... Just like an eagle aiming for it's prey... Swoooosh... There you have it, a nice meal.

Gon Jinn: Brilliant, master, indeed brilliant.

As their master, the stranger walks away from the room. There's a number can be seen from the back of his hand. ''5''.

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The next morning, Tetsuo sits in front of the farm house with Lylford.

Tetsuo: Hmmm... I heard that Cain is ready for it.

Lylford: Yeah... The battle won't be long...

Tetsuo: Ya have faith in her?

Lylford: ..... I guess, it's a yes.

Tetsuo: ...


And suddenly, a huge presence of reiatsu appeared out of no where. Lylford and Tetsuo quickly summon their reiattou out. This reiatsu, it's evil. The mass reiatsu even wakes Ruri up. She knew something is wrong.

Ruri: Urghhhhh... This... Reiatsu....

She summoned her reiattou and too went out the house.

There it is, a portal that tears through a sky. Huge reiatsu is coming out from inside the portal.

Lylford: It's a fuera.

Ruri: Fuera?

Tetsuo: It's a portal, that connects two place instantly. Only one type of people can use that.

Ruri: Huh?

Tetsuo: Shinigamis....

Just right by then, 2 people walked out from the fuera. Standing on the sky.
Indeed a great scene.

Female Stranger #1: There she is...

Male Stranger #2: Ruri Michalka. We've come for you.

It's a woman and a guy. The woman is wearing an eyepatch on her left eye with long blue hair and the guy seems old. Moustache and a pair of lazy eyes.

Lylford: Ruri, back off. They're not your opponents.

Ruri: What?

Tetsuo: You might win us in a battle. But trust us, they are different.

Lylford: We are more experienced in battles, just go and find Darucard.

Ruri: I won't go...

Lylford: GOOOO !!!

Ruri then djinns away. She knew it's harsh to leave the 2 of her companions behind. And she sensed that something dreadful is going to happen. A tear dropped from her eye.

Lylford and Tetsuo, both still wearing the injury from yesterday. Are stood in front of two overwhelming forces. Epic.


** Stay tuned for next chapter **

Friday, August 20, 2010

Chapter 6: Los Caídos

That arrow almost blast right through her heart. Ruri merely dodges it with all her strength and speed. She almost snaps out of her breath and thinking this is the end of her life.

Ruri is thinking: How can i get into all of these troubles? Am I really so desperate to avenge my parent's death? I am risking my life...

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In a flash back scene, we see little Ruri holding her mother's hand walking in the market searching for foods for dinner. And that's when the riot happened.

Bunch of outrage armies from the Shinigami Clan rushes into the market and killed everyone off. Ruri just freaked out and tried held on her mother's arm tightly. And that's when a muscular guy with silver hair grabbed her mother away. Although the guy's wearing a scarf around his mouth, but she still remembered the guy's face. There's a tattoo of butterfly etched on the side of the guy's cheek.

She screamed as her mother is taken away. After that incident, she never see her mother again.

And after she went back to her home. Her house is a mess. Someone just broke into her house not long ago. And there her father is, lying down in a pool of blood. She screams...

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Back into reality.

Inside Ruri's mind, the female voice whispers again: Ruri.... Ruri....

It's that voice again. That's the voice whom got Ruri into obtaining her own reiattou.

Female Voice: Remember... The... Name...

Ruri is trying to catch her breath. Lylford is just standing not far away from her holding his bow.

Female Voice: The name of your reiattou...

Ruri: Huh?

Female Voice: (Whispers something very softly...)

And right at that moment. History happened.

The whole battle ground is suddenly filled with heavy dense of  high pressure reiatsu. Everyone is shocked by the sudden happening. Lylford couldn't believe what he is actually seeing with his own eyes...

Ruri's body is burning, wildly.

Darucard and Colt are too amazed and can't even say a word about it. They just stared at the whole thing.


Ruri then speaks, in anger: [First Tear, Byeorrun Gum]

The earth starts splitting. Lylford, who was standing on the ground, fly up to the air.
The same goes to Darucard and Colt. Both of them djinns into the air to look for cover.

And then, Ruri is shown, holding, her reiattou.... In First Tear form.

Darucard: That is...

Colt with his mouth wide open: Oh my god....

Lylford: She is holding 2 katanas at once.

Ruri stood in the air holding 2 swords. Both of her arms clenched the swords tightly.

The sword on the left is the shape of a normal blade, but the shaft is blue in colour. Along with drawings of phoenix on it. There is also a string tied to the shaft.
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The shape of the sword on the left hand. Almost like the one in picture.

The sword on her right is a bit different. The tip of the blade curved in a little bit, just like the crescent moon. And the shaft stretched out farer than the left sword and also the shaft is also blue in colour. There are drawings of dragons on the shaft.
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The shape of the sword on the right hand. Only it's a bit longer and better looking.

Byeorrun of the Soaring Phoenix, Gum of the Roaring Dragons. That's what her reiattou is signifying.

Lylford: What's that?

Ruri: My First Tear.

Right after she finished that sentence, she disappeared right in front of Lylford's eyes.

Lylford: What?!!!!

Ruri appears again right in front of his eyes. Lifted her left hand and strikes down onto Lylford. Lylford blocked it fast enough but then there is her right sword cutting up from below. He again djinns away and shoots a few arrows at Ruri. Ruri simply blocks off the arrows with just a single lift of her sword.

Lylford is really shocked on what's happening.

Lylford's mind: That's some terrying speed! Right just now Tetsuo injured her on her back, but now her wound is all gone. She is all back up again, and this time far more stronger than I've expected.


On the other side of field, Darucard and Colt stood in the air.

Darucard: I guess that decides it, Colt, we gotta go. There's still 1 more important person that we gonna find.

Colt: Okay.

Darucard's mind: Ruri, I believe in you.

Both of them then djinns away into nowhere.


Back to the battle field, Ruri agains charges towards Lylford with both of her reiattous in First Tear form.
Lylford just djinns around trying to find a good place to aim for Ruri, but he keeps failing at it.

And out of no where, a single slash comes from above. That cut off some part of Lylford's hair.

Lylford: MY HAIR!!!!

Ruri: Now below you.

And then, another swing of her reiattou comes from below of Lylford.
This time, Lylford is not so lucky. He got hit in the side of his right leg. Then he djinns away.

Lylford: Girl... I'm really impressed.

Ruri: Thanks.

Lylford: But... I'm scare that this battle is going to end right away.

Ruri didn't speak a single word but there's a struck of lightning down her spine after she heard those words.

Lylford: Wake up, Hell Star Shower Bite. Wake up.

Ruri stares at his bow. As the bow started to glow. And it's started to engulf in red reiatsu gas.

Lylford: Meteor Shower of Death.

Thousands and thousands of arrows shoot out from Lylford's arrow, with lightning speed.

Lylford: Ruri, this is the end of it. This is the ultimate power of my First Tear, Hell Star Shower Bite. I absorb the surrounding's air pressure and then bind with my own's reiatsu. Thus creating thousands of arrows and blasting them out in lightning speed. There's no escape.


*Slash...*


Lylford is hit. On the right side of her upper body. The cut is deep.

Lylford: What!?

Ruri: Well, I think this is the REAL ''end of it''.

Ruri appeared beside of Lylford while all the showering arrows are shooting. And that cut decided the battle.
Lylford press his hand against the wound. The pain and blood pouring out is killing him.

Ruri: Sorry but seems like this round belongs to me. Come, let's get some rest inside the farm house.

Lylford: ....

Ruri then turned her back and walk towards the door.

Lylford: Wait girl...

Ruri: Huh?

Lylford: Who are you actually? I mean, WHAT are you?

Ruri smiles: I'm just a normal girl.... With the same goal as you guys... Trying to turn down the Shingami Organization.

Lylford didn't reply after that. But inside his mind, he was thinking that Ruri is absolutely amazing. She is the key to achieve their goal. To bring peace to the land.

Ruri's Byeorrun Gum disappeared and went back into her body.

Ruri: Thank you, Byeorrun Gum.


** And it begins...**
Stay tuned for next chapter.

Sunday, August 15, 2010

Chapter 5: The Clutch

For Viewers: Sorry for the delay, been busy for the past few days. Anyway, here's Chapter 5, and I would like to change the style of conversation talking for easier reading. Enjoy and keep on reading!

** For the least steps she take is another chance to survive this apocalypse. **


Adrenaline rushes against the clock. Ruri doesn't fear the opponent, what she need to fear is her ownself. Holding the seemingly powerful reaittou, she tends to breakthrough her ownself.

Darucard: She is determined, ain't she?

Colt: You bet...

In instant, Tetsuo's reiattou swing towards Ruri's head. It's the first time she faced such danger in this quest. But without hesitation, she blocked it easily. She is frightened with her own speed and power, how can she block such blow with just a single lift of her reiattou?

Lylford: I'm sure that you're shocked, isn't it? Shock because of your own power?''

Ruri: ......

Tetsuo: Nice block ya girl, ya see. The moment you achieve ya own reiatsu level and your reiattou, you had already automatically achieved inner power of your ownself. Just that ya didn't realise it at all...

Just right after Tetsuo said that. Lylford is charging at Ruri behind her. Ruri is quick enough to realise that. With a single lift of her reiattou again, she blocks off the powerful attack from behind her and then at the same time kicks the stomach of Tetsuo whom is standing in front of her.

Both guys are amazed by her talent.

Darucard: Oh my oh my... She seems invincible. Colt, ain't you gonna join in?

Colt: Ha... It's better that I spectate this whole battle and learn her weakness...

Ruri keeps on charging towards her 2 enemies. But still, Tetsuo and Lylford didn't even give a damn about her strongness or whatsoever.

Suddenly, Tetsuo disappeared right in front of Ruri.

Ruri: What?!

Tetsuo, behind of Ruri: Got ya lil girl!

That blow landed on Ruri's back. Blood spurts out from her back. Ruri then falls on the ground.

Ruri lying on the floor struggling: What just happened?

Lylford: Djinns just happened.

Ruri: Djinns?

Tetsuo: High speed movement which is utilized by the user's reiatsu power. In short, almost same as Teleportation.

Those words struck Ruri's heart like a lightning flash. She started to feel scare, she fear that she can't win this battle. She can't learn her own reiattou's name. Lylford and Tetsuo seem merciless, they didn't take a step back at all.

Darucard's mind: Ruri, don't fear. You can do it. Trust yourself...

Lylford started to walk closer to Ruri, holding his own reiattou.

Tetsuo: Come on Ruri, it's that all ya got? I thought you are The One?

As the both of them walk towards Ruri whom lying on the ground almost lifelessly because of the wound.
She disappeared.

Darucard, Colt, Tetsuo, Lylford: What?!

Ruri: Behind ya, Tet.

Tetsuo reacts quick enough to block off the attack by Ruri whom is suddenly behind of him.

Tetsuo struggling the block attack: Djinns?!

Ruri: Ya. Thanks for the guide.

Lylford: She learnt it so fast.....

Ruri puts in all her power for that blow. And eventually, her own power cuts through Tetsuo's reiattou and slashing Tetsuo's front body with that mighty cut.

Large pool of blood spurts out as Tetsuo fall to the ground.

Ruri holding her reiattou breathlessly: One down...

Tetsuo gets up and say: Good job girl... Now I might wanna take a rest. Ya are qualified.

Tetsuo then dijinns away. Lylford doesn't seem scared at all.

Lylford: Idiot Tetsuo, he shouldn't do it so rushly... Now girl, I shall let you witness the true power of my reiattou.

Colt: He is going to use his First Tear ain't he?

Darucard: .... Hold on Ruri.

Ruri is speechless. Her next opponent is going to use First Tear against her. A single thought about it chills her spine.

[First Tear, Hell Star Shower Bite]

Lylford: Girl, real game starts now.

Lylford is not holding a reiattou. It's a bow-like weapon. Only that it's actually red in colour. The whole is like covered in blood. That there are ancient writings on the bow.

Ruri: What is that...

Lylford: What's this? This is my First Tear, girl. And please be amazed what can this bow do to you.

Just right Lylford said that, dozens of blood arrows fly towards Ruri. Those arrows doesn't seem solid at all, it looks like they were made out of reiatsu, but its red in colour.

Ruri djinns and tends to dodge all the fast arrows.

Lylford: That ain't going to work, girl, YOU NEED TO BE FASTER!

Lylford then djinns around and at the same time fires his arrow too.

Arrow seems flying towards Ruri from every single direction. She couldn't catch her own breath.

And then, when she djinns around and try to dodge all the arrows. She missed one direction. An arrow is actually flying towards her, from below.


** Meteor showering arrows, god please spare her a life. Stay tuned for next chapter. **

Wednesday, August 11, 2010

Chapter 4: Great White Affair

** Can't fear your own sword. **


Sun had just rised, on a hazy hill, a few figures can be seen.

''So, what now?'' Says a male voice.

''That girl had already gained her own Reiattou, amazing stuff she had there. Trust me...'' Says a recognizable voice.

As the haze begins to fade, the faces can be seen clearly. It's Darucard and 3 unknown fellas discussing something, mainly about Ruri.

''Come on... Ya aren't going to fight this uphill battle with her aren't ya? She's just a lil girl, ya know?'' Says a guy with a cocky voice, biting a toothpick and eventually lied down on the grass trying to avoid the conversation.

''That's why I need you guys, badly.'' Says Darucard.

''Well, I will consider. Any benefits?'' Says a guy with cool mean look, medium-long hair and a very calm voice.

''Darucard Spiegel, ya know? We already quit this kind of thing few years ago. Nah, we don't wanna get our hands dirty again. Ya know, to avoid unnecesarry troubles. As ya can see, we don't oppose the system anymore, we follow it.'' Again says the guy lying down on grass.

There is another guy standing there. With a cigarette in his hand. He had never spoken. Curly hair, wearing glasses and staring at the bright sun rising up.

Darucard shakes his head. And then he says:'' Where are all your spirits? Guys, aren't you all upset about the whole new era thingy made by the dirty Shinigami Organization? What the hell are you guys doing? Trying to live your whole life their way? Come on, WE CAN DO THIS!''

The calm guy with glasses had finally spoken. ''I'm in...''

''What?! Cain, really?'' Says the cocky as he gets up from lying down.

*Bamm!* The medium-long haired guy punched the cocky guy right in the face.

''What the fuck are ya doing?! Lylford !?'' Yells the cocky guy as he is suffering from pain.

"Just a punch to wake you up. You're right Darucard, we are all in.'' Says the Lylford guy.

''What?! But I didn't say anything, what do ya mean by the word WE ARE ALL IN?!?'' Says the cocky guy as he cover his face in pain.

''Just shut up will ya? You are indeed killing me, Tetsuo. Get your ass up, we're getting going.'' Says Lylford.

''This is going to be a blast, guys. I'm so glad that you're all are finally back.'' Says Darucard.

Once again Cain did not say anything. He puts both of his hand inside his pocket as the 4 of them headed back to the farm.

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''Ruri, wake up...'' Says Colt while trying to get Ruri off the bed.

''Just let me sleep for a few more hours, puh-lease???'' Well, maybe Ruri is actually dreaming.

''Gosh, there's no time to wait. You're going to learn the name of your Reiattou, TODAY!'' Says Colt.

And in an instant, Ruri gets up from her bed. She then frightens...

''Where's my reiattou!?!?!'' Says Ruri with a worried face.

She searches everywhere in the room, as Colt tries to interupt her.

''Don't worry Ruri, your reiattou is fine.''

''THEN TELL ME WHERE IS IT?!''

"It's right inside of yourself. Girl, for your information. We don't carry reiattou around in our waist. Those are for old-fashioned warriors. We fused our reiattou together with our reiatsu inside our body. When we wanted to use our reiattou, just tell yourself inside your mind, then your reiattou will automatically appear in your hand.'' Explains Colt.

''Well, try it now.'' Says Colt.

Ruri then closed up her eyes, and from her appearance, there is a serious look on her face. She keeps mumbling those words inside her heart.

And then the reiattou appeared right in front of her eyes. She's holding it in her hand. Blue in colour.
She is amazed and captivated by it. She started to inspect her own reiattou. There it is, her own reiattou.

''Amazing isn't it? I've never seen anything like this before, your reiattou is indeed special.'' Says Colt.

''I wanna know it's name...'' Says Ruri.

''And I wanna destroy the whole Shinigami Clan...'' Says Ruri, this time with a very determined look in her eyes.

Colt is stunned upon hearing those words. But at the same time, he knows that she is the one that is capable of turning over the whole evil organization. She, is, the, ONE.

Just by then, Darucard and the 4 other guys arrived at the scene.

''Well Ruri, let's mee our new friends. They're joining us now, to achieve our goal.''

Ruri is kinda surprised to see 3 strangers set foot inside the room. First guy seems like a real dickhead. Spiky  gold hair, biting a toothpick and that cocky look on his face. Second guy seems nice. Medium-long black hair,  perky nose and wearing a new western coat along with a smile on his face. The last guy on the left seems the coldest. Glasses, silver short hair.

''Ruri, from now on. They will be fighting along with us, and believe me. They're strong...'' Says Darucard, with a grin on his face.

Ruri is once again really surprised with the scene. She keeps staring at the third guy, she knew something was going on with him. Although the third guy doesn't even look at her, but, she can feel that.

''Hi ya lil girl, I'm Tetsuo, Tetsuo Hayama.'' Says the cocky guy along with both of his hand on his head.

''Hi, you must be Ruri aren't you? I'm Lylford, Lylford Vega. Nice to meet you.''

The last guy seems like doesn't want to introduce himself. So Ruri decided to skip pass him.

''Well, I'm Ruri Michalka! Nice to meet you all! Please guide me if I done anything wrong.'' Says Ruri with a cheerful smile on her face.

''Cain, aren't you going to introduce yourself?'' Says Lylford.

''No, I'm going to take a walk. Don't find me until you guys have finally done something extraordinary...'' Cain walks out the door after saying that.

''It's okay Ruri, that weirdo is always like that.'' Says Tetsuo.

''I'm alright... But he is kinda interesting, aren't he?'' Asks Ruri.

''Perhaps...'' Darucard interupts the conversation.

''And now, let's get started. Ruri, time to learn your reiattou's name.''

In a flash second, huge amount of reiatsu is filling the air. Ruri almost choked her lungs upon feeling that. But seconds by seconds she started to calm herself down. And then she lifted her head.

Tetsuo and Lylford are there holding their reiattou. They both smiles.

"Ruri, go get em'!'' Says Colt.

''I won't go easy on ya, girl.'' Says Tetsuo.

Lylford just standed there with his right hand holding his reiattou and his left hand inside his pocket.

''Me too, gentlemen!'' Screams Ruri as she rushes towards the 2 newly-met ''teammates''.


** Blue disgraces, Jolted fists, Bloody Axes, Hell is now officially opened. **
Stay tuned for Chapter 5.

Friday, August 6, 2010

Chapter 3: Learn It Like The Wolves

**Facing the unknowns, they are ready to drag out her source of despairs.**

The shocking scene stunned Ruri. Beside of Colt stood dozens of wolves. Howling and thirsting for blood.

''Ohhh.. Long time no see, your wolves... They sure does get abit stronger aren't they?'' Says Darucard staring at the wolves.

''Yeah, Darucard. And I'm going to make it work for you, Ruri. You're going to learn how to gain your own reiattou by playing games with me, and my wolves.'' Says Colt.

Ruri can't utter a single word at all. She seems scared and terrified. She can't do anything. She's like fighting the unbeatables...

''What....are...they?'' Ruri is trembling while asking that question.

''Oh, since you asked. Well, let me tell you. Those are my reiatsu wolves. I generated them by using my own reiatsu. When my reiatsu is strong and in good form, the wolves will be stronger too. They are like the part of my body. They follow whatever I ask them to do. And you're going to win them. Don't worry, I won't kill you. But you must learn the way to overcome it...'' Says Colt with a smile on his face.

And before Ruri can say anything. Colt pointed his finger towards her. And those wolves started rushing towards her.

Ruri is screaming while dodging the attack of the wolves.

''Well, she sure is fast, when escaping.'' Says Darucard.

It's a real struggle for Ruri, she is not an experienced fighter. So she's just keep on running.
The wolves are closing in as Ruri is taking a right turn to the backside of the barn. And then, she is surrounded by the wolves.

"Oh my god...Please help me, ask those wolves to stop. I don't want to die! Please!!'' Ruri yells.

Darucard and Colt didn't speak a single word. They are carefully watching the scene. They knew Ruri can achieve something amazing, in just a few minutes.

''Colt, aren't you a bit cruel? She almost pee her pants.'' Says Darucard.

''Don't worry, the wolves ain't going to bite her, they are just barking at her...''

Ruri almost went collapse when she sees the transparent body of the wolves, but with sharp fang.
After all, those wolves are made out of reiatsu.

Ruri's mind started weaving. She's in the thought of giving up as those wolves are barking and showing the deadly sides of them.


Just when she is about to fall into the pool of darkness. She heard a voice, coming from somewhere but she don't know. She can't recognize the voice. It's a female voice.

''Ruri... Ruri Michalka, are you going to give up?''

''Who are you?! Why do you know my name?'' Says Ruri, inside her mind.

''You doesn't need to know who am I, but for now. You are going to know yourself.''

Ruri felt her soul is being pump out from her body. But then, something seem like replacing it, and took over the whole body.

Her body is shaking, all the reiatsu wolves beside of her are perished because of the huge reiatsu released from her. And then, she screams...

Suddenly, a pillar of light appears from the sky, shooting down to Ruri. Darucard and Colt are fascinated by the scene, they know they had finally did it.

A great explosion occured in the place where Ruri stood. Almost blasting off the surrounding areas.
Darucard and Colt are both under great pressure of reiatsu presence. They are really stunned.

''This is the most amazing thing ever happened in my life. Just feel the reiatsu, it's huge. This girl is really something.'' Says Darucard.

Colt remained silence but nodded his head. Seems like he agreed to what Darucard had said.

In mere seconds, Ruri shows up from the burning flames. Carrying her own reiattou. It's a really special one.

''Oh boy, that reiattou... It's glowing. I had never seen something like this in my life, this reiattou. It's... amazing.'' Says Colt, with his mouth wide open.

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The reiattou of Ruri looked something like this, but it's in blue colour instead.


''Blue coloured reiattou...'' Says Darucard.

She seemed invincible while holding the blue glowing reiattou. As she walked towards Darucard and Colt, she collapsed onto the ground as the reiattou disappeared.

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Ruri opened her eyes. Staring at the wooden ceiling. She is lying on her home's bed. Colt is well asleep sitting on a wooden chair not far away from her. But Darucard is nowhere to be seen.

She started to recall what happened during yesterday's event.

And... She can feel there is another soul living inside her body now. The reiattou...
She closed her eyes and went back to sleep again. She knew that, a great war awaits her...

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In a very dark room where people's face cannot be seen clearly.


''So, anyone already knew that the girl had already gained her own reiattou?'' Says a guy sitting in the middle of the long desk.


''Who cares... I'm going to kill her anyway...'' Says another guy.

''She's mine...'' Says another guy with smiling tone.


''And her partners... That 2 guys...'' Says another guy, a grin can be seen from his face although the upper part of his face is covered with shadow.



''Don't you know that 2 guys have more companions? They aren't going to charge at us with just only 3 people, they are going to build another team too.'' Says a girl.


''That means more enemies.. Yummy...'' Says another guy while licking his tongue.


''So what, no matter there are how many of them I will still freaking kill all of them, because I'm the strongest in here and I know what I'm doing.'' Says another guy with cocky tone.


As for the other people in the room, they remained silence.
And by the look of that, there are 11 people...
In the room...


** Enemies in dark, game start. Stay tuned for next chapter. **

Tuesday, August 3, 2010

Chapter 2: Knowledge Is Deadly

**One girl, along with two strangers, that's how games are started.**


''Who are you?'' Asked Ruri.

''I'm the one that can help you, Ruri Michalka...'' The tall guy answered.

''I don't understand all of these... What's happening? I'm confused... really...''

''Girl, you are the chosen one in Nantalgium's Prophecy.'' Says Colt, the short guy.

Ruri seems confused abotu the Nantalgium's Prophecy thingy, she doesn't know anything about that, she's kinda caught up right now.

''You know? You, Ruri Michalka, is the one, the one that can bear the greatest power ever, you are the kind of godslayer that borned once for a very very long time, or to be more precies, 500 years. Ruri, you're a genius.'' Says the tall guy, and he continues..

''My name is Darucard Spiegel, and I can bring you to revolt the whole Shinigami clan.''

A spark of electricity strikes through Ruri's every single nerves in her body. What his man had said, is that all true? The only thing that she wanna do before she die, perhaps is to bring peace to this land, by destroying the whole Shinigami Organization.

''What you mean you can?'' Asked Ruri, tempted to know about the answer.

"I have everything that I can, to dispel the evils..'' Grinned Darucard.

Colt started to get bored and eventually started to lie on Ruri's bed. And he said:''Gosh, this is going to be a while, I will just take a short nap first, wake me up when you're done, Darucard...''

Ruri is stunned. She never thought things could happened so fast, but on the other hand, he is kinda excited at the same time.

''Just some knowledge for you, The whole Shinigami Organization is divided into 10 Divisions, each division has their Chieftain and their Vice-Chieftain. Of cause, chieftain's skill is ridiculously powerful, but I'm pretty sure you can overrun them easily, I can teach you all the skills you need to learn. And also, besides the chieftains and vice-chieftains, you have to face another group of terrors. The Clannads. They are said to be the guards of the leader of the whole Shinigami Organization, and they are even more powerful than the 10 chieftains and vice-chieftains, and no one had ever see their faces before. But there are only a few amount of them. So, are you in? For this dangerous job?'' Says Darucard.

Ruri doesn't know what to say. It all happens too fast. But she wanted to avenge her parent's death....

She nodded her head...

''Well done, Ruri, you have my promise, I will train you.'' Says Darucard.

''Wake up! Lazy ass! Time to get going!'' Darucard yells at Colt whom is lying on the bed sleeping soundlessly.

Although Ruri doesn't know what is the horrible things that she is going to face in the future, but she is ready against all the odds.

That night, Ruri followed the two of them back to their place. It's rather far from the town. Continued toward the north of the town, they arrived at a farm.

''So, here's our secret training place.'' Smiled Darucard.

''Phew, finally we're back. Gosh I'm getting really old, my legs don't really listen to me these days, I'm going to take a nap again, call me when you guys need me ya.'' Colt complaint.

And all that left is the awkward silence you had in the starry night outside somewhere in a vast land of green grass. Darucard is packing up some of this papers and stuffs in a small room. It's filled with bookshelves and loads of papers. And the ink on the table, waited for his own to be use. Ruri followed behind him without a sense of direction. And finally Darucard found something out from all the messes.

''Well well well, let's look at what we've got here.'' As he flips through the thick book.

''Ruri, this is it. The Book Of Reaittou.'' Says Darucard.

Ruri remained silence, but the sign of question mark and lots of questions can be seen on her face.


''Well, Reiattou, a type of katana, is what we use to battle. All the chieftains and vice-chieftains know how to use that. Only the strong ones can control it. It's the combination of Reiatsu and Katana.''

''Reiatsu?'' Ruri wandered what is that.

''It's the spiritual energy of one's body. The amount of one's carry equals to how powerful he is. Well, you can gain the max reiatsu of yourself by years of training. But for you is different, you're the one from the Nantalgium's Prophecy, you can adapt it very fast, perhaps, a few days or maybe 1 day if you learn well.''

Ruri is shocked from hearing that. She doesn't even know how to wield a sword, so how can she even know how to control her own reiatsu.

''This is kinda ridiculous. How can I adapt it when I have no experience at all?'' Asked Ruri.

''Well, there is a way  you can gain your own reiattou. And I'm going to help you. And you're going to fight Colt.'' Smiled Darucard.

Ruri is in shocking status once again. Can she really beat that short guy up? And then Darucard continues with his wisdom words.

''Every reiattou has their own name, and the wielder of reiattou has to learn the name of their own in order to fully control it and pushes the power of their reiattou to the limit. All the shape of the reiattou are same, in the first stage.''


''What do you mean by in the-first-stage?'' Ruri interupts.

''Haha, Ruri. Here's this interesting thing about reiattou. It evolves and changes. There are total of 3 stages of reiattou. First is the normal looking katana you have. Second stage is [First Tear]. First Tear will happened when the wielder of the sword has finally fuse their own soul together with their own reiattou. Every First Tear of every single reiattou is different. Once the First Tear is activated, the Reiattou will change form to access whatever special abilities it is capable of. Mostly in weapon shape, but there are others in other shapes too.''

''What about, third stage?'' Asks Ruri.

''Well, the last stage of reiattou is call [Final Tear]. To achieve it, one must be able to materialize and control their reiattou spirit. And there are only Chieftains can achieve Final Tear state of their reiattou. Most Vice-Chieftains only can have First Tear. To achieve Final Tear, it took years and years of training. And of cause, Final Tear is extremely powerful.''


''Mr.Darucard..'' Says Ruri.

''Just call me Darucard, my friend.'' Smiles Darucard while putting both of his hand into his pocket.

"Darucard... Do you have your own reiattou? And, can you show me your First Tear and Final Tear?'' Asks Ruri dumbly.

Darucard bursts into laughters.

''Soon you will see them, my friend, soon...''

And then out of no where....

''I thirst for your blood.'' Says someone in the darkness.

[First Tear, Thirst Wolf]

Ruri quickly turned her head back...

It's Colt, holding his second stage of reiattou. Well, actually it's not holding. There are dozens of soul wolves standing beside of him, thirsting for blood.

''Well Ruri, time to start your training.'' Says Darucard and Colt, and a grin on each of their faces.


**Can she eventually uphold herself and fight through all these? Please stay tuned for the next chapter.**